[quote="Sabertache"]OOC: Just a little note (I'm not part of the topic, but I'm a mod so I have a slight responsibility in this area) that was what we call godmoding. See, you can't control the other people's characters. You can say you hit the sword aside, but as for saying Kuro's character fell backward and panicked, no dice. In fact, we have a series of articles in the New Members forum called the Newcomer Articles, those are well written and should explain a lot about roleplaying etiquette.

Also, I haven't RPed with you yet, Kuro, but you're doing amazing. Glad to have you around. :D[/quote]
it is my character kin of the sheikans

OOC: In that case, you still godmoded because you said that your character was pinned down by Kuro's character.

Sabertache wrote:OOC: In that case, you still godmoded because you said that your character was pinned down by Kuro's character.

i fixed it

As the man's sword bounced off the boy's staff, he went into a blinding rage. He pointed his weapon at the newly appeared boy. The electricity on the sword shot out, spread out and converged on one point. The boy's head.

Kuro ran to save the boy, but Hiruma grabbed his arm. "Don't put yourself in that kind of danger," he said. "We need you here. The boy will survive. He might even dodge the blast, so there's no point in risking your life"

"Then why wouldn't I be able to survive it?" Kuro asked. Hiruma didn't reply. He knew Kuro would survive without a doubt. He merely didn't want him hurt.


OOC: Thanks for the compliment Sabertache. I really appreciate it.

Kin jumped away, but it was to late.He was hit. Something seemed wrong. Kin was standing,his eyes turned pitch black and his hair was spiked up. He disappeared within a second and reappeared behind the man and Kin's staff was glowing with an aura that was amazing. Kin hit him down.
"OOWWWWWWWWWW."
Kin yelled and fell down. He went back to his red eyes and his hair fell back to place. Blood was all over his shirt. His head was hit so hard that he was gushing blood from the back of his head. Was he dead?

As soon as the man fell, he rolled back up. He looked at the boy and decided he wasn't worth attacking. He turned back to Kasei and raised his sword in the air. A clone appeared by Kasei, and brought his sword down.

While the man was distracted, Hiruma and Kuro ran to the dieing boy. They each placed their hands on him and prayed a silent prayer. When they were done, the boy glowed white. When it faded, the wounds were healed.

Kin opened his eyes to the two boys. He was about to cry. He stood up and seen the boy about to get sliced. "Thanks, I would tell you my name but it will be to late." He said as he vanished.
He reappeared by the boy that was about to die by sword. Kin hit the boy away with his staff and then put his staff up in the air to block the sword.

OOC:Kasei can hardly be called a boy, considering he has a granddaughter.

IC:The man wasn't surprised that his sword was blocked. He was even less surprised that the boy left himself open. His clone remained in the same position as the real man attempted to stab Kin's back.

Kin was stabbed in the back but that was a clone he used. From a tree, Kin attack the clone. He used a deku dagger he found. He throw it at the clone as if it was a throwing knife. Kin's speed was amazing. A second after the dagger hit the clone, Kin's staff was shining a yellow aura. He got behind the man and mumbled something and then a elecrical beam shot out of the staff. It was aimed at his head. "How do you like it when you get shot in the head by an elecrical beam." Kin fell backward from the force of the blast. Kin hit a rock and got knocked out.

OOC: I didn't know and I hope that man is dead

The man held his sword up to the oncoming blast. Every particle in Kin's attack was being absorbed by the sword. While that was going on, Kuro crept up to the man and thrust his sword into his back. After the attack was absorbed,the man stared at the blade that seemed to grow out of his body. When Kuro pulled the blade out, the man fell. He was on the ground. Bloody and lifeless. As soon as he hit the ground his remaining clones disappeared. Was he dead?

Kin opened his eyes to see what happened. He seen the man on the ground and the boy standing with a bloody sword. "What happened?" Kin yelled.


OOC: sorry it is short

Despite the fact that he was nearly dead, the man stood up. He created six clones, and positioned them behind everyone fighting him. Seeing this danger, Kuro's eye's turned black, and a black fire consumed his sword. He attacked the man before he could do anything. The man fell to the ground and was consumed by a blue fire, just like the monsters of Hyrule do when they die. Then the man's clones disappeared.

Kuro's eyes reverted to normal, and he fell to his hands and knees. He coughed a total of twelve times, with the occasional blood being coughed up. Then, he collapsed.

Kin got up and ran to the boy how was coughing blood up.
"Are you ok?"Kin yelled.


OOC: sorry its short

Kuro coughed a few times more before standing up. "Yeah. I'm okay." He paused for a few long and awkward moments. "Who are you? And, what happened?" he finally asked. He forgot everything that hppened during the time where his eyes were black.

" I'm Kin, a sheikan boy, and I don't know." I said. " What happened to me?"