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Posted: Fri Aug 11, 2006 6:25 pm
by Cloud 9
Dont worry Baris! I still owe her my life. Technically you saved her this time by taking her away, I only killed Veran. She will be fine.

Cloud stared at the fading Baris.

Baris...tell a woman named Raine, that her little brother says hi. Also tell her that I am sorry and that I miss her.

A tear began to form in Cloud's eye, but he quickly brushed it away.

Good-bye, Baris!

Posted: Fri Aug 11, 2006 6:30 pm
by Hi no Seijin
Baris nods his good-bye. Then he is gone.

OOC: How stupid was that ending. :D Well, I guess I better get started on the next part. But first, I must hone my dungeon making skills. And using sprite sheets.

Posted: Fri Aug 11, 2006 7:50 pm
by Cloud 9
OOC: Normally, I dont point out bad things in peoples work, but yes, that was a stupid ending.

IC:
Cloud nodded back, even theough Baris was gone.

I have to check on Lady Rose!

Cloud ran off in the direction of the castle.

Dont worry Baris, she is safe as long as I lve. thought Cloud.

Posted: Fri Aug 11, 2006 7:56 pm
by Hi no Seijin
OOC: Crap, now I have to start a topic over there. Well, let's pretend I'm a hobbit and it's my birthday gift to you. Wait. I am a hobbit. :wink:

Yeah, <a href=http://desertcolossus.com/adventures/vi ... >here's</a> a link to it. Thought I'd be nice.