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Title: my work
Post by: oracle on January 24, 2007, 08:11:25 AM
. Free verse, no pattern  
Daisy Dachshund


Daring, dimwitted, dachshund,
Like a wiener, and her bed is a bun.
Scared of bubbles, and seeing herself in a mirror.
Makes the carpet wet,
Seeks food and sneaks into the bin,
Hides things under her bed,
Treats, trash, toys,
Always goes for the nose.
Deer poo, cake, pizza, apple, bugs,
She eats anything she sees,
Eyes bigger then her stomach.  
RrrWoof, a sharp, loud bark,  
And she knows when she has done something bad,  
Jumps in bed, ears go back and wags her tail.
Smooth and rough,
Short and long,
Black and tan,
Fur.
And took herself into bed.

. Acrostic poem, the first letter in the poem is the name of my dog.




Dachshund
Annoying
Ignorant
Sausage
Yap


. Cinquain has five lines with syllable pattern.

Dachshund
Hungry, thirsty
Wirer, furry, skinny
Sneaking, shadow, in the darkness
Dakshunt

i love my dog very much
Title: Re:my work
Post by: darkphantomime on January 24, 2007, 04:19:02 PM
What do you know, I also have a daschhound... heheh... he's about ten years old though...
Title: Re:my work
Post by: oracle on January 24, 2007, 05:14:16 PM
i don't know how old she is but... i think she 7 months old
Title: Re:my work
Post by: DW on January 26, 2007, 05:50:07 PM
you should do a haiku...
Title: Re:my work
Post by: Zelda Veteran on January 28, 2007, 11:20:28 AM
A Haiku is short, but can be packed full of deeper meaning.
Title: Re:my work
Post by: oracle on January 29, 2007, 09:00:07 AM
Quote from: Shikamaru Nara on January 26, 2007, 05:50:07 PM
you should do a haiku...
no i have Free verse, Acrostic poem and Cinquain.
Title: Re:my work
Post by: DW on January 29, 2007, 10:04:22 PM
yes, so why not haiku? haiku are fun...