The Desert Colossus

Community => Fan Works => Topic started by: Vaati on March 15, 2007, 02:02:58 PM

Title: Tales Of A Forgotten Minish (Part I)
Post by: Vaati on March 15, 2007, 02:02:58 PM
From the Diary of Vaati Picoru: "I had to go to market today with mother. I hate going there, so many other Minish that just stare at you and...Mrs. Ripico...Ug! She always has to pinch my cheek saying, "Oh my! Isn't he the cutest little thing?" But mother says I shouldn't be so negative about her, and I guess maybe, I shouldn't.
   But I'm about to tell you something that I really don't feel like telling you. It makes me sick just to think about it."
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I know, it's short. But the other chapters are longer, it's just Vaati's diary entries that are short. The story, in general, is in third person, except when it's a jounral entry by Vaati or it's from Ezlo's point of view. This is just one of the thirty seven chapters. And I'll post the next chapter as soon as I get some comments.
Title: Re:Tales Of A Forgotten Minish (Part I)
Post by: Takun on March 15, 2007, 02:08:21 PM
The story told from Vaati's point of view. Awsome  :P
Title: Re:Tales Of A Forgotten Minish (Part I)
Post by: Hi no Seijin on March 15, 2007, 02:08:45 PM
I read a fanfic or two from Ganondorf's perspective, but never Vaati's perspective.  This should be interesting.
Title: Re:Tales Of A Forgotten Minish (Part I)
Post by: Vaati on March 15, 2007, 02:10:11 PM
Thanks!  ;) I'll post the next one.  :D
Title: Re:Tales Of A Forgotten Minish (Part I)
Post by: Mysterious F. on March 15, 2007, 02:52:51 PM
You could put them all in one topic like me to avoid over-extensive numbers of posts.
Title: Re:Tales Of A Forgotten Minish (Part I)
Post by: Vaati on March 15, 2007, 02:59:57 PM
No, the story is about thrity pages on my computer and it would probably be more here.
Title: Re:Tales Of A Forgotten Minish (Part I)
Post by: Mysterious F. on March 15, 2007, 04:01:11 PM
Post them in seperate posts.
Title: Re:Tales Of A Forgotten Minish (Part I)
Post by: Vaati on March 17, 2007, 06:02:02 AM
Are you sure that's allowed? Anyway, this is the way I did it on Zelda Land and as soon as I get up to where it is there, I'll just give a link.