The Desert Colossus

Community => Fan Works => Topic started by: Pixie on May 17, 2007, 04:52:09 PM

Title: Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: Pixie on May 17, 2007, 04:52:09 PM
Written by Shikamaru Nara, drawn by myself. Only two pages are done right now though..   :-[
It's based off the Ocarina of time storyline, believe we were calling it Zelda: The Unabridged Legend.. Or something like that.

Whatcha think so far? (haha.. two pages) ;-;

Page 1 (http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n264/piksia/ichi.gif)
Page 2 (http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n264/piksia/ni.gif)
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: Gamefreak on May 17, 2007, 04:56:09 PM
Very nice.  Compliments to you and Shikamaru.
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: Mysterious F. on May 17, 2007, 06:25:40 PM
Very nice.
I hope more will come out.  :)
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: TP Zelda on May 17, 2007, 09:12:10 PM
Quote from: Pixie on May 17, 2007, 04:52:09 PM
Written by Shikamaru Nara, drawn by myself. Only two pages are done right now though..   :-[
It's based off the Ocarina of time storyline, believe we were calling it Zelda: The Unabridged Legend.. Or something like that.

Whatcha think so far? (haha.. two pages) ;-;

Page 1 (http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n264/piksia/ichi.gif)
Page 2 (http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n264/piksia/ni.gif)

Omgosh the second is so funny!!!! :D
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: DW on May 17, 2007, 09:12:41 PM
NICE! :DYour drawing skills are great, we'll be able to go very, very far for this....as for more coming out, we've already storyboarded the next two, I should get to work on more of them actually....
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: Hi no Seijin on May 18, 2007, 07:55:45 AM
Ahem.

:P

That certainly would explain some things about Link, that second page will. :P

Can't wait to see more. :)
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: Fishalicious on May 18, 2007, 02:32:12 PM
Poor Link's pants...

Ooh, I like your art style, and I like your storyline, Shika! :>
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: DW on May 18, 2007, 03:21:42 PM
Yeah, the way I made this series is based on all the little quirks that are in the game, I'm trying to pick on every little detail...if I remember correctly, the next part deals with Navi :P
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: Pixie on May 18, 2007, 03:48:09 PM
Haha, glad you guys all like it. : D
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: DW on May 18, 2007, 04:05:39 PM
Just wondering though, what's Doujinshi? ;) Is it Japanese for parody comic?

EDIT: okay, I googled it, it's a fan comic...gotcha...

anyways, is it okay for me to advertise this, Pixie? I have people I think would love to come watch this...My grandma would like it probably :D
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: Pixie on May 21, 2007, 06:27:52 PM
So.. I thought I'd give a shot at using tones and may have gotten a bit carried away. Sorry. x3

00 (http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n264/piksia/loztul-manga-00.png)
01 (http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n264/piksia/loztul-manga-01.png)
02 (http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n264/piksia/loztul-manga-02.png)
03 (http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n264/piksia/loztul-manga-03.png)

Note ~ Didn't exactly know what to write down for the dialogue page 3.. Hope that it's alright. ....STILL working on page 4.  :P Zzz.
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: DW on May 21, 2007, 06:46:38 PM
Hey, that cover looks great, we could definitely use that...Great job, again. and the dialogue was amazing, you captured his style of speech perfectly. ;)and sorry about not supplying much dialogue, I'll try and be more thorough. If it helps, I'm replaying OoT slowly to get more of the feeling of the characters so we get them right...

So then, what's this DA you were advertising it at?
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: Baka Nezumi on May 21, 2007, 09:17:48 PM
It looks really good so far, you guys. You are a very good artist, Pixie!
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: collaboration on May 22, 2007, 02:56:47 PM
That's pretty neat. Good work, you guys!
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: Gamefreak on May 22, 2007, 03:33:23 PM
Am I supposed to read right to left like a manga?  Or left to right like a book?
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: Pixie on May 22, 2007, 03:35:32 PM
Thank you. ^^ Ah, left to right like a book.
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: MagmarFire on May 22, 2007, 06:05:50 PM
Brilliance. Sheer brilliance. :D

There are now THREE comics that I really like now: El Goonish Shive, Looking for Group, and Zelda: The Unabridged Legend! :D
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: Hi no Seijin on May 22, 2007, 06:13:23 PM
You only have three?  I have like twenty something. :P

Anywho, yes, you are a good artist Pixie.  I wish for a skill level similar to that on a daily basis.
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: DW on May 22, 2007, 06:20:30 PM
Alas, I do as well. Too often am I ridiculed after drawing assignements :'(

Fourth page should be up soon, looking forward to that...

EDIT: Also, on a side note, we have set up a site for the comic. Here it is:

http://zelda-tul.smackjeeves.com/
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: Zelda Veteran on May 22, 2007, 07:25:58 PM
You guys have done an amazing job on this. I SOO wish I could draw like that!!! I've been drawing for like 7 years, and I STILL suck!! How did you get so good Pixie? :-*
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: Pixie on May 23, 2007, 02:05:10 PM
*hugs everyone*  :) You guys are awesome.

As for how I got good at drawing.. Well.. Practice, practice and more practice. Also patience, lots of that too. xD

Page 4!! (http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n264/piksia/loztul-manga-04.png)

Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: DW on May 23, 2007, 03:07:53 PM
hehe, nice. If only faeries could wear glasses, this whole incident could have been avoided....
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: Pixie on May 26, 2007, 09:57:49 PM
x3 Haha... A fairy with glasses..
Page 5! (http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n264/piksia/loztul-manga-05.png)
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: DW on May 27, 2007, 05:50:56 PM
haha, once again brilliant! It's getting quite popular at SmackJeeves, 17 fans already....good ratings too...
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: MagmarFire on May 27, 2007, 07:11:33 PM
So that's how Navi took on the job? Brilliance! :P
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: DW on June 05, 2007, 11:31:48 PM
Wow, it's booming at our site now...we're going to get famous...
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: Takun on June 08, 2007, 11:36:34 PM
OH! MY! GOD! THIS IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO AWESOME!!!

I too have been drawing for years, but my skills are, less than desireable. I added your website to my favorites list. And Shikamaru I love the creativity you pump into the comic!
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: DW on July 18, 2007, 09:53:17 PM
Page six is finally up! Just head to our site to read it.

http://zelda-tul.smackjeeves.com/

Hopefully, we'll maintain a better update schedule after this.
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: Zelda Veteran on July 18, 2007, 10:25:06 PM
lmao! Hey! Look! Listen! :P
Link should git up and take the electric fly swatter to her :P
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: MagmarFire on July 19, 2007, 07:47:11 AM
Well, there's no WONDER why Link didn't want to get up. :P

Fantastic! Keep it up!
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: Fishalicious on July 19, 2007, 11:09:18 AM
That explains a lot. XD

I feel bad for poor Link... losing his only pair of pants and then being awakened by Navi's nagging.
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: Fierce Deity Link on July 23, 2007, 05:05:09 PM
If you like this stuff, search newgrounds for the real legend of zelda!  



people opening the door of time  (hidden from view, whispering to eachother): Man this sh**  is heavy! Yeah. That kid probably thinks that the song he played opened these doors. Yeah, what dumb a**! Yeah really!
Navi: Ooooookay.....
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: DW on July 24, 2007, 01:45:21 AM
I've seen it, but it's a video, not a comic. So have you seen the comic?
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: Fierce Deity Link on July 25, 2007, 03:30:57 PM
Yeah! I like it alot ;D


                       <o>MWWAHAHA!!!

Navi is EVIL!!!
poor Link...
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: Pixie on July 31, 2007, 05:51:21 PM
:) <3

OMFGNOWAY! Color? Uh-huh.

Page 7 (http://www.smackjeeves.com/images/uploaded/comics/cbd01b283701.png)
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: MagmarFire on July 31, 2007, 05:54:09 PM
HAHAHAHA!!!!! Poor Link! :P
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: DW on July 31, 2007, 10:32:31 PM
I have no idea why I keep dragging this scene out so long. Maybe I just enjoy seeing him get beat up by Navi. :P
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: Pixie on August 01, 2007, 09:23:32 AM
Yes! Get him out of that room already! I'm bored of drawing it.
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: DW on September 02, 2007, 08:38:30 AM
Alright, we have actually updated a few times since the last post here, I just forgot to tell you guys. :P So once again, here's the link to our site:

Zelda: The Unabridged Legend (http://zelda-tul.smackjeeves.com/)
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: Fierce Deity Link on October 29, 2007, 06:00:46 AM
Wow...this topic died... :( Any updates?
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: Aureliano on November 04, 2007, 04:48:59 PM
No offense but...

THIS COMIC IS AWESOME!!!!
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: DW on June 02, 2008, 03:51:28 PM
After a long absence, The Unabridged Legend is finally being revived.

http://zelda-tul.smackjeeves.com/

I gotta get to script writing...
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: MagmarFire on June 02, 2008, 06:30:16 PM
Heh... Link Tushy... XD
Title: Re:Zelda Oot Doujinshi
Post by: Hi no Seijin on July 17, 2008, 07:20:41 AM
I wondered what Hyruleans put on their boxers.