The Desert Colossus

Community => Fan Works => Topic started by: Stefanie131 on February 15, 2006, 06:52:40 PM

Title: After it all part 2
Post by: Stefanie131 on February 15, 2006, 06:52:40 PM
Link, Epona and Navi were still going along the hoof prints of the kidnappers. It led all the way out of Termina Field. The hoofs led to an area Link has never explored before. The area look vaguely familiar to the Gerudo Valley in Hyrule. In a second Epona reared up and Link fell on his back. The wind was knocked out of him, Link tried to get up but fell back on his knees. He clutched the brown dusty ground, "damn it" Link whispered to himself . He got back up but stumbled a little, still shaky from the fall, he felt a barrier in front of him. This dint make any sense, he could see right through it. He could still see the hoof prints right in front of him.
"what is it?" Navi said touching the invisible wall. " I don't know" Link said . He pulled out his sword and started hitting the wall. He let out a small whimper after hitting the wall several times. Link dropped his sword and pout his hand on the wall. He fell back and sat on the dirty ground, he pout his hands on his head and started to think. Navi looked around, she saw a small ledge and followed it. Navi fell to the bottom and could see link on the other side of the barrier. "LINK! LINK! LOOK!" she screamed, Link looked up. He got up as quickly as possible and ran up the ledge and fell down like Navi did. A small dirt road took Link and Navi to a fortress with female guards. This was exactly like the Gerudo fortress. Maybe it is the same tribe.

Link became very stealth-like trying to avoid the guards in the front. From what he knew about the fortress in Hyrule, there would be prisoners inside and maybe they were holding Zelda captive. He made it inside one room with a small cell that had blood stains on the wall. Back in Hyrule a Gerudo thief would come out of nowhere and battle Link. This time no one came. Link left the room and entered a door. One room led to another room until Link was outside. It was getting dark and he hadn't even found Zelda yet. He saw another entryway that seemed different that the others. Link entered it, and right in front of him was a small room with a door and a small window. "Her!" Link heard an unfamiliar voice and went towards the window. He saw a tall man with a resemblance of Gannondorf. "Your sure son?" a tall Gerudo woman said pointing at a blond woman. "Yes her", "from all the princesses we kidnapped you choose the one from Hyrule?" "YES mother, her". "All right, take her to her cell!" "Kill the others". The tall Gerudo woman commanded, her minions kicked the princess and took her to her cell.
Link gasped, his eyes wide, mouth open. He shook his head and ran out the door on the other side of the room. It led to Zelda's cell. "LINK!" Zelda screamed. Link came over to his princess. She was not dressed in her wedding gown but in a traditional white Gerudo outfit. ' I-you-I thought- the girls" Zelda mumbled. Link kissed Zelda passionately through her cell. He looked down and Zelda's leg was bleeding from the kick the Gerudo guards gave her. Zelda suddenly started to fall, but link caught her barley. The cells bars started to cut into his arm. "Ahem" a voice came from behind Link. Zelda gained conciseness and brought herself to her feet. She stared at the guard with two swords behind Link.
Link started to reach for his sword and turned around. He jumped to the side and swung his sword at the guard. As the battle ended, the guard dropped a key. Link went and got the key. Little did Link know, another guard was right behind him about to strike. The last thing he heard was Zelda screaming out his name...
Link opened one eye and felt a horrible pain coming from his head. He lifted his arm and pout it on his head. As he brought his hand down and looked at, there was blood all over it. "shit" Link said wiping his hand on the stone bench he was laying down on. He got up and remembered the key he pick up. He search his pockets and found it. Plus he still had the Master Sword and his shield. Obviously the Gerudos weren't very smart. Link went over to the door and opened it. Once Link made it outside it was still dark, from what he could tell it was about 6:00 in the morning.
"YOU THERE HUALT!" a Gerudo guard said pointing her spear at Link. She called other guards to come to her assistance. . Link pulled his sword out and started running towards some of the guards. Link caught them off guard and swung his sword and got them in their stomachs. One came from behind and slashed Links arm, luckily it dint hurt him much, but he still fell. The guard came and tried to stab Link with her spear but he used his shield against her. Link got up and swung his sword, it hit the guard in her leg and she fell over.
It had been at least ten minuets of fighting had gone by, more and more guards would come and try to kill Link. Link had gotten seriously hurt, along with his head injury he has cuts on his cheek, arm, shoulder, and on both legs. There were only three guards left. One of the guards tried to get at Links head, but he dodged it easily and tripped her. Suddenly a large bell rang. The remaining guards gasped " Oh! It's time!" they ran from Link and ran up a large hill. Link followed and when they got to the top of the hill there was a large Temple facing him. He looked around and ducked. There were many Gerudo's dressed in elegant clothing. He started to remember what the Gerudo said to the man that looked like a younger version Gannondorf. He looked around for anything to help him. He remembered one of the guards he killed had a bow and arrow, he could use it to snipe out some of the guards guarding the entrance to the temple.
He ran down the hill and found the bow and arrows, Link ran back up the hill and everyone was inside. Link ducked down and shot two arrows at the two guards, they both fell silently. He looked around for anyway to get in. If he just when in there would be guards waiting for him, and that wouldn't be good. Link heard wedding music starting to play. It seemed to loud to be coming only from inside, which means there had to be an opening. Link looked up and saw a window open on the east side of the Temple. There was a balcony were the open window was but it was thirty feet above the balcony . Link still tried, the temple was made of brick so he could fit his fingers through the little crevasses. Link was about more than half way to the window. Little did he know that in one second he would be close to death. He was getting dizzy due to how much blood he lost. His left hand slipped which caused him to swing back and hit his head on the hard brick. Link felt like letting go of his hold but dint. Links hair and white recolor of his hat were now red with blood. His cloths and everything was full of blood, but he tried not to think about how painful all this felt.
Finally he made it to the ledge where the open window stood. Link look inside and saw Zelda, a priest, a choir, an audience of Gerudos and a tall man with a crown holding Zelda's hand. Zelda was chained up and still wearing the white outfit Link last saw her in. Link pulled out the bow and arrows he found and aimed at the man with the crown. Link shot the arrow and it hit the man in his neck, if he wasn't' dead he was surly paralyzed. The man fell and the audience gasped and looked around to see what happened. The guards looked around holding their spears tightly. Link saw the Gerudo flag he jumped on it, he slid down the rope he pulled out his sword as he got close to a group of guards. Link swung his sword and killed the guards. Link dropped down from the flag. He dint know weather or not to kill the priest, he looked at cautiously until be pulled out a wimpy dagger out of his robes and started running towards Link with it. Link grabbed the priest's hand that held the dagger, bent it backwards, stole the dagger right out of his hand and stabbed him in the back with it. Everyone in the Temple who was a threat to Link was dead. Link went over to the man with the crown and looked around him for any identity. There was a tattoo on his knuckles and it read G.N. "I wonder what that means" Link said. Everyone in the audience had their mouths open wide. None of them got up and did anything, or said anything.
Link walked over to Zelda. " Are you all right?" Link said holding Zelda's hands. Zelda nodded, she looked at him he was injured badly. Zelda pushed his hair back and hugged him. One guest from the audience stood up. Link and Zelda started to run out of the Temple, one of the guests screamed " HEY!" Link pulled out his sword and quieted the guest.
Link and Zelda ran outside and out of the Gerudo Valley. The two came upon the area where the barrier was. This time for some reason the barrier was gone. Link saw Epona standing there. Poor thing, she hadn't eaten or had been groomed for two days. Link and Zelda climbed up on Epona and rode off. Instead of going home to the castle Link rode over to were the carriages were invaded. Link got off to check if anything had happened to the girls. No one was there. The only sign of relief was a note written by Saria
i have everything up to pt. 3 so um they will all be up soon.
Title: Re:After it all part 2
Post by: Zelda Veteran on February 16, 2006, 03:07:59 PM
Another Incredible chapter! Keep it up! There were a few grammer errors, but hey no one is perfect
huh ;)






WAITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Title: Re:After it all part 2
Post by: miko on March 29, 2006, 11:47:10 AM
that so cool!!!!!!! :D