breeze is one of the rito,daughter of medli and komali.when she first got her wings,she stood high on top of dragon roost island with valoo and held her arms out,closed her eyes and admired the wind blowing through her hair.she opened her eyes and jumped.she let wings grab the air and soared above the clouds.little did she know about her destiny to become one of the sages......
apperance:a lot like her mother when she was young but with ginger hair and blue eyes.she's beautiful for her age.
personality:curious,brave and again a lot like her mother.
instrument:her mother's harp.she likes to play it on the shore of dragon roost island.
what do you think?
Its awesome! provide a background to make her different from the rest of the rito.
hhm, well,let's see...
she is obviously different coz she becomes the sage of love and coz of medli being an earthsage due to her bloodline,everyone might of expected breeze to be the next earthsage.the reason she becomes the love sage is because she has a big heart under all her curiousity and courage.plus she gets a visit from nayru,while she's playing her harp.nayru was secretly the love sage and needs someone to take her place.
good idea to create a new type of sage, I like it.
i like it too! i'm proud of myself! a little secret bout my character:
she fancies link! ;)
lol knowing you she would do lol :D ;)
here's why she fancies him!:
breeze was playing her harp on dragon roost shore when link came sailing to the island in korl.he jumped out the boat and followed the sound of breeze's harp.breeze jumped when link tapped her shoulder. link asked her what her name was and how she got medli's harp.(link didn't know anything bout breeze till now.)she told him she was medli's daughter and the harp was given to her on her 11th bday.link got out his windwaker and tested her to see if she knew the earth god's lyric.she did and played beautifully.the two then got talking about god knows what!link and breeze looked deep in each other's eyes till the pirates charm rumbled in link's pocket.it was korl saying he should be getting back to outset.link kissed breeze's hand and left.a tear rolled down breeze's cheek as she played the earth god's lyric while watching him sail away...
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that's so romantic :'( :'( :'(
it is isn't it? i'm beginning to be proud of myself! ;D
so u should be lol ;) ;)
that was really good! And you have every right to be proud.
thanx! i'm wondering on wat to right next! ;D
this is how breeze realised she was a sage:
(we carry on from where we left)breeze walked slowly into the mail center and into her room(which used to be komali's room)she lay on bed and let tears drop on her bedsheets. just then,she heard a voice behind her saying "are you breeze?" she turned round.it was nayru.an actual goddess in her bedroom."greetings breeze.i am nayru,goddess of wisdom.i came here to tell something important." breeze just stared.nayru smiled."this may shock you,but you breeze,are in fact a sage. a sage of love."breeze blinked."why me?"she asked."i watched you with link.you handled that very well..."breeze couldn't beleive it."if you need me,play this song." nayru said and got out her own harp.she played a small yet beautiful song.breeze got her harp and played it."it's beautiful..." breeze whispered.and with that,nayru was gone.breeze never knew she was so important....how do you like it?
It was awesome! I liked it! iy just keeps getting better and better! you rock!
thanx!
WOW! That chat went far enough without me!
Great Character, I really love it! Have you opened a section in the FanFic for Breeze yet?
Looking forward to see your Character work it's way...
that was brilliant Medli, sos not checked for ages lol. :)
dunno wat to do now
Lol. I dunno maybe describe her future and what happens to her.
yes, give us a storyboard... or reveal some plans about what she will do or what will happend to her..
You could also put her in a story at the Library, or HA2 ;)
YEA THATS A DAMN GOOD IDEA.
have 2 say , that was gr8.
well done!!
All I can do is smile... ;D
A stroke of Excellence, Medli has created ;) ;)
u guys r sweet!
well i've gotta idea:
a dark shadow type person(maybe vaati or sum1 workin for him) travels to dragon roost but not on boat(you know how vaati travels?) she takes breeze's harp(without it,she feels worthless and pathetic)
that's all i can think of right now.. :P
Well hopefully you get more ideas soon... you can't just leave us wanting more! It's like tempting a bulldog with a steak! you end up with a damn ugly drooling dog gnawling on your arm... ::)
::)
where we leaft off:
breeze was so excited, she went to the shore and played some music on her trusty harp.she could then see a red boat in the distance. maybe it was korl? it was.but was that link?the boat stopped as it reached the island and link got out.they saw each other.smiles.link walks up to breeze with something in his hand." hi breeze" he said."link!i've got some good news!" link gently took breeze's arm and put something in her hand.what was it? breze looked.it was a bangle with the three pearls in mini form graved on it." oh,link....." she kissed his cheek."your welcome..." link said with a smile on his face."wat did you want to tell me?" he said.breeze looked at the bangle on her wrist and realised it was too soon."nothing" she said.and link out his wind waker and breeze held her harp.they played beautiful sounds as the sun set on hyrule's great sea....
wat do u tink?
an awesome romance! Took my heart. And was the bangle reflecting the zora's saphire?
that was soooo sweet! ;D
Anyway, I wondered about one thing... how is it to be kissed by a beak? Must be awkward... ::)
Great story though! Keepm 'em coming!
us ritos try not to peck........
and wat do you mean about zora's sapphire zv?
Yea wot do u mean zv??
where is he anyway? ???
I dunno, hes abandoned us
hey! I didnt abandon no one no how! :D Ill always be here. Sometimes I just decide not to post if I have nothing useful to say! lol! And your character is the envy of every girl on this site, I can guaruntee it! ;)
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!that's good news!
Very good, I think thats why i accidently post convos cause i cant think ov anytin 2 say ill just post for the sake of it
:)
u guys r sweet
lol we know :P :P :P :P
::)
carrying on:
as breeze and link were playing music together,the sun set and the moonlight shone." it's getting late" said link. "why don't you stay here? i mean,it would be silly to go sailing at night.it's dangerous" link opened his mouth when yet again the charm vibrated in his pocket. "link, your grandma wants you home now! where are you?" it was aryll. link felt embarassed."aryll! i'm.....coming.....home with a friend. tell grandma ok?" he said. "ok,brother!" link put his charm away and gently took breeze's hand.he guided her to his boat and helped her in.before link could get his sail out,medli swooped down. "breeze,where are you going?" she said. breeze sighed. "mom,surely you know link?" medli looked at him.she stroked his cheek. (the link in this story is ww link's son.ww link got hooked up with ww zelda and had 2 kids and named after their dad and their dad's sis) " ah,yes. the son of my hero." medli said. "i'll let you off tonight.come straight home at noon.don't rush things,or you r true love will sail away to another, just like mine did..." and with that,medli took flight.....
how dod you like it?
awesome! Its getting better!
(http://www.zeldart.net/fan%20artists/YUZUKA/Link&Medli%20YUZUKA.jpg)
awwwwwwwwwwww, soooo sweet
i'm lovin it too!
lol, Tis kool. I like, Im makin my Goron Elder Character in a min. His name iz Thron. Thanx Lokes for the name btw lol.
zv,that pic is so cool! :D
I know Init.
it's soo beautiful i could cry :'(
I cudn't, Im a man, Im heartless lol
Ha! :)
::)
carrying on:
link and breeze are now together gazing at the moon on aryll's tower.link puts his arm round her shoulder and holds her hand.breeze rests her head on link's shoulder. "this is so romantic"she said. "yes,you are..." he said."what?"she said looking at him. "erm..." he sighed...."breeze,you are so beautiful in the moonlight....i'm glad we're sharing this moment and-" breeze done a surprising move. a lip lock. he held her hips(as you men do..) and she wrapped her arms around his neck.(they are both 14 years old so don't think they're too young!) their lips let go. "i know how you feel because i do too.." breeze said quietly."i just wish i knew what my mother meant when she said about her true love sailing to another...my father doesn't know how to sail a boat....." link looked in her eyes."maybe your mother meantsomeone else..." he said. breeze was confused. "what do you mean?" she asked. "maybe she meant my father..." he said... there was a pause. link began to lip lock again but breeze gently pushed him back. "what do you mean,link? tell me..."
well,is it cool or what?
I dont get it. One time Breeze iz gaggin 4 it wiv link n the next she pushes him away?????????? women... ::)
wat? we no wen men r hiding sumut! we want the truth ;D
link looked again deeply in breeze's eyes. "she hasn't told you?"he asked. she shook her head. link let go of her hand. "my father helped your mother in the earth temple,right? well,maybe they got close to each other while they were in there..." he carried on. breeze tryed to understand what he just said. " but..why didn't he stay wih her?"she asked. "who knows?...would it have worked anyway?"he said. breeze hought about it. "who is your mother?" she asked. "i....don't know...my father has never mentioned her..let's just carry on with what we were doing?" he smiled and held up her chin. lip locking.....breeze tryed to forget but couldn't
well,wat do u tink?
kool. Is this sum kinda wierd brother/sister relationship????????
SWEET! ;D
Quote from: Shadow Ganon on March 12, 2006, 09:14:30 AM
kool. Is this sum kinda wierd brother/sister relationship????????
no! i wouldn't make a bro and sis lip lock!
and thanx!
oh gd. Sos if it offended lol
nah! it's kk!
;D
phew lol :-* :-*
lol! :-*
link let their lips go. "what's wrong?"he said. "well,i'd like to know who your mother is! maybe if we find her,we can get her side of the story!" she said. "oh,breeze. not this again! look,i told you! i know nothing about my mother! why is this such a big deal? it's got nothing to do with you!" he moaned. breeze frowned. she walked to the ladder. "where are you going?" he said. she turned round. "bed. i might aswell get some sleep for my flight home tomorow!" she said and climbed down the ladder. link rammed his fingers though his golden hair. "nice work,link..." he said to himself. he climbed down the ladder to catch up to her. "breeze! breeze,wait!" he shouted. she stopped to let him catch up. he ran up to her and held both her hands. "i'm sorry. i didn't mean to....i'm sorry." he said,eager for forgivness. breeze sighed. "it's ok. i shouldn't have mentioned your mother seeing as you've never seen her..."she said. "let's go to bed now. we can sort ourselves out later." they entered link's house and had to share link's bed(ooohhhh! :D)
wat do u tink guys?
kinky lol, joke itz brill :-* :-* :-*
thank you! ;D
now what to do..... ???
I dunno. maybe describe there kids lol, joke :-*
let's not rush into things! ;D
lol thats all link wants lol joke :-*
hhm,ur rite............it's not his fault breeze is soooooo beautiful!
lol, she must get her looks of her mum
aaaaaaaawwwwwww! thanx! she got her gob off her father though....she may not be lippy when i'm writing bout her but she is at home! ;)
lol, beutiful ppl need attitude
;Dlol :-*
lol thanx 4 the kiss :-*
ur welcome :-* :-*
:-*lol yay :-*
u deserve more :-* :-* :-* :-*lol
as do u :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-*
yay :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-*
lol ur gr8 :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-*
i no :-* :-* :-* :-*
still wondering on wat to do next!
lol, mayb u cud describe her growin up
wid link? hhmm,that could be interesting! thanx! :-*
ur most welcome :-*
ur so helpful! ;D
well,i can do it but not now,wen i can be boverd! ;D
lol, i know wot u mean :)
lol
lol :)
is that ur fave word? ;)
mayb lol. :-*
lol i'm still stuck for ideas! ???
oh! i know:
breeze woke up the next morning finding herself...in link's bed?! "oh no!" she said. link yawned and said "morning babe." he went to kiss her cheek but she put her hand on his mouth. "what did you do to me?!" she said. "nothing.."he said. he realised what she meant. "oh,you thought...we didn't. grandma couldn't find any spare blankets or pilows so we had to share my bed." breeze sighed with relief and fell back on the pilow. "that's good news. otherwise,my mom would kick me out!" link looked down on her and smiled. to be continued....
lol thats kool, but mayb link is just saying that so nine months later he has nothing to do with it ;)
hhmm,that does sound like what i was gonna do before i realised this is publicly read..i might use anyway! ;D
It... is... so... GOOD! are the words glowing ginger?
no. thanks anyway! ;D anyway:
breeze got dressed and stood by the fire. "where's your grandma? is she gonna cook breakfast soon? because i'm hungry." she said. link pulled his tunic on and said "she's probably gone for a walk to talk to sturgeon" she looked back at the fire. "hhmm...maybe i could cook something.my grandfather has been giving me lessons since my parents are so busy delievering." link got up. "are you sure you won't burn my house down?"he joked. she slapped his arm with a smile,and looked up to aryll's bed. "is your sister still sleeping?" "i don't know..i'll check." he walked and looked up to aryll's bed. there she was,telescope in her bed with her. her eyes blinked open. "big brother?....what are doing up so early?" she said. "i wanted to,is that a problem?" "link!"breeze said from behind.
that's all i could think of right now!
i think when i right my story i will include Ayrill in it! just to make it more intersting!
i am going to do my story to look for it
... ??? ::) :P
i think miko means "i'm going to do a story,so look out for it"
oh... ::)
I might do my Princess Tetron Character, or the Dodongo plot????
kool! i'll be lookin forward to princess tetron!
carrying on:
"forget breakfast,i might aswell go home now" she said.she walked to the door. "breeze wait!stay a little longer!" ha said. "yeah breeze stay longer"said aryll. "no,i don't think my mom would approve...she'd probably think...never mind,take me home?"said breeze. "well,ok. as long as i get to stay at yours soon"he said and opened the door for her.they stepped outside.sue-marie,the jar-on-her-head girl walked over to them. "i thought i could hear another little-un in the making last night.."she said and walked off. "what was that all about?"breeze asked link. "um..she probably thought the noises were us but it was probably orca and his thumping around!" he said. they walked to the boat and set sail for dragon roost...
to be continued
thats really good!
thats amazin medli, great story
thanks! where have u been sg?!
SG! YAY! UR BACK! have u been sick or somut? tell me!
tell me! look at Summer! tell me what u think bout her!
sorry for the double post! the damn screen is screwed up!****!
oh crap! modify your post and delete some of the s and g
Hunter grave
A place were no human go and only demon and imps good eat away the hunter and the hunter be come the hunted.
The hunter Barrhogs in search for the forbidden light stone.
Barrhogs Brother Aremogg trap in the forbidden light stone.
The forbidden shadow card hold great power of the darkness
And to get it solved the riddle.
It cannot be seen, cannot be felt, cannot be smelt.
Under hills, and empty holes it fills.
It comes first and follows after, ends life, kills laughter.
The forbidden light stone got smash by the evil warlock king Gotdock in rage
Barrhogs kills many warlock and spawn knight in Hunter graveyard
In search for his Brother soul upon death the warlock king is killing him
Brother soul is lost to the hell and a new quest start to find to three gate of hell
The black gate, shadow maze, the sea of soul the gate of hell and the demon king
Kodieo.
End of part 1
The gateway to hell
Once going throw the Hunter grave Barrhogs is looking for item like food and a new sword he saw a town named Saydeekey the towns people help Barrhogs by giving food and water and their forbidden sword.
The great sword is known as the Reaver of the gods.
A boat is spotted like a ghost ship of lost soul of eternal darkness Barrhogs fire an light arrow from the town it goes throw the ship in to the sea of soul but creating an gateway (the gateway is a black hole) to hell looking for an rowing boat he find one rowing to hell.
Once gone throw the sea of soul he find the black gate and killing the guards he find a map of hell and going in and out of dungeon many demon saw him he killed them all.
He helps a female fighter named Soyko Modoshoe and her sister Miko Modoshoe
Barrhogs find Nark a Vampire Magician Barrhogs fights to the DOOM vs Nark.
Soyko and Miko find the dungeon that keeps Aremoggs soul and a lot hellknigths.
End of part 2
The fight to the doom!
After the battle against Nark Barrhogs searched for his new friend Soyko and Miko.
He finds them and Soyko dieing at the hands of Descolo god of the sand Miko is next but
Barrhogs step in so now its Descolo vs Barrhogs.
Miko tries to help by using Magician skill but Descolo moved out of the way and impaled Miko her going to the shadows Barrhogs friend dieing by the force of hell and darkness.
By Aremogg's soul respawn Aremogg they both kill the darkness and finding Kodieo
They face the fiend but he to powerful but by the power of the light sword of the Raygone Aremogg respawning Soyko and Miko and the odd is looking good Barrhogs friend using light and ice and freezing hell and Kodieo and Descolo flee
And Barrhogs and his friends wins.
Fight for death
Barrhogs was evil at one time in life his heart the forbidden shadow card and dark Barrhogs is trying to get free from Barrhogs soul but Barrhogs gave in the dark side of him and killing any thing a live Aremogg trying to save the people and save his Brother the shadows in Barrhogs soul.(coming soon)
you love posting that,don't ya?
anyway,where was i?:
while they were sailing the great sea,breeze was still curious about what sue-marie said. "link...are you sure nothing happened?" she asked. link sighed and stopped the boat. he took her hand. "breeze,if something happened i would've told you by now. and you have every right to yell at me or slap me if i'm lying. ok?" "yes,but what about my question?" she said. link bit his lower lip. "you...did.didn't you?" "look,i didn't do anything to you!" then why do you act so strange when i ask?" "do you want to go home or not?" breeze slapped him. "take me home,yes. see me again,no." she said. she couldn't help but let the tears drop as she turned her back to him. link rammed his fingers through his gold hair. "breeze,you don't understand! i didn't do anything!" "but you act like you did!" "it wasn't me!" breeze turned around. "it was my brother.."he added.
to be continued
OMG! OMG! OMG! that... was... so... GOOD! and what did breeze think link did?
what you think of my?
well, it's a bit rude to say but i'll give you a hint:
wat do adults and teenagers get up to?
who are you talking to ???
tp zelda
ok
oh!
get me?
carrying on:
"what do you mean your brother?" asked breeze. "my brother broke in my house last night. and he put some spell on you,so you wouldn't wake up. i don't think he saw me but i could see him. then..he put his hand on your stomach....and....well,WHY DON'T YOU JUST FLY HOME?! BECAUSE YOU GOT YOUR WISH!" link explained(and shouted) with tears falling from his eyes,knowing he wouldn't see her again now. breeze did as she was told,as she left link to weep alone. but breeze didn't exactly fly home, she landed on the northen triangle island. there,she got out her harp and played a tune just like sheik's as she too cryed. "not working out between you two?" said a voice from behind. breeze turned around. there,was the guilty man himself,omni.
"who...are you?" she stutterd. "me? i'm the father of your child,well,future child." he said as he sat down before her. "you......your link's brother?" he asked as she examined his colours compared to link's. "i know i wear black and have silver hair,but this could work." he said,taking her hand. she snatched it away. "you really think i'll run into your arms that easily? my true love just...."she wanted to say but didn't. "i know what happened. i just want to be with you." he said,not really understanding the situation. she looked into his blood red eyes. "you don't understand...." she said.
to be continued
so good!
thank you! ;D i planned on letting omni in since i thought breeze ;)
very good! but why did Omni touch breezes stomach?
because,he has wierd powers. just one touch of his fingers can do anything! so,using his powers,he touched his "true love" and has now implanted a omni jr. inside her..........
jerk
hey what you think of my and great job
i think ur character is great darkness_link! and great job medli!
thanx.
carrying on:
"what's not to understand? it's over between you and him,and the beginning between you and me." he said,walking closer to her. she went to slap him hard,but he stopped her arm and kissed her. she couldn't wriggle away. she tryed her hardest to push him away but he held her tight. she was about to give up hope until omni suddenly collapsed in her arms. "what the?" she said,then looked up to find....link! with his father's skull hammer in hand. he put away the hammer as he said "i knew he'd do this one day." she ran into his arms. "am i forgiven then?" he added. "i'm sorry...i couldn't..." she said. link put his finger on her lips. "come on....let's take you home." he said. he helped her in the boat and sailed off. omni was left on the island in agony. he opened his eyes and saw she was gone. "ugh...i'll get you for this....stupid brother..." he said to himself.
to be continued
whoooooooooooooooo! nother!
lol when i can think of more,it'll be twice the drama
i have to write that part on ur site. i already write it on mine
thank
thank wat?
i think he thinks ur guna put it on his site. thats why hes thanking u. but sorry darkness_link, medli ment my site. just to let u guys know... im to sad to say it! :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'(
kool
:'( :'(hi new comer. :'( :'(
hi
if ur wondering where medli went then... shes gone
hi poeple
shes not here any more. so were going to write the rest on our webbies!
Quote from: medli on February 28, 2006, 07:35:13 AM
dunno wat to do now
You should make this into a story and add it to the library. :DLots of people would read it. :)
Who's Breeze?
That is the point of this thread to role play as new charcters.
i miss medli... :'(
i like it... the sage of love... *runs it over in mind several times* yeah... i think they should make a game like that with zelda characters... sorta like hamham heartbreak ahahahaha!!!
you do realize that this person is banned, and this topic is nearly a year old?
I think medli checks... as a guest of course. :D As a person that can't reply to anything... 8)
cute so cute :'(