Going nowhere fast,
All hopes are cast
out into sea.
Who's jumping first,
off the cliff of life-
you or me?
Falling faster than ever before,
My parachute was deliberately tore,
to shreds of feelings old dead and gone,
the will of my being hung, and drawn.
Seems like I'm going in circles here in my head,
maybe life is too long, and I'll be better off dead.
I'm an impatiant guy, too much waiting to see
who'll go first, you or me?
Awaiting the rush,
falling faster still,
here comes the crush,
of my ending will.
Through clouds of disgust,
at the place I'd been brought.
I close my eyes,
never was I taught.
Blue ball of deciete,
I'll hit the concrete,
with destructive force,
no sadness, regret, tears or remorse.
Going downward fast,
the ground is in sight,
eyes closed tight...
It ends tonight.
Eeeeemmoooooo
The spacing is sporadic and the spelling/grammar for some parts is a little iffy, but other than that, you've done well.
zipit. I'm typing on a laptop, so typos are everwhere. And nobody proofreads(my work). I'm an okay speller, but I don't have to be finohminahl tu git mai poynt akrost.
Why does laptops equal typos? My computer is a laptop, and how many typos do you see me make?
As for the poem, it's okay, I guess.
You should see my dad's keyboard XD
And no more automatic spellcheck.
He has plain old Internet Explorer.
Its my first time using a laptop too.