The Desert Colossus

Community => General Discussion => Topic started by: Takun on August 28, 2008, 06:56:47 PM

Title: Her
Post by: Takun on August 28, 2008, 06:56:47 PM
As I stood in line I saw you
Clad in an MCR t-Shirt and slightly torn blue jeans
Your brunette hair beautiful and flowing
Your eyes dark and deep
Your freckles magnifying your beauty
Your teeth so perfect and white

You laughed and I nearly cried
As your voice rang through my head
I wanted so badly for you to be mine
But alas it could never be
And although it was never said
I just some how knew
Im just not good enough for you

So as I grabbed my lunch
My heart began to break
Maybe someday though
The perfect guy I'll make.
Title: Re: Her
Post by: MagmarFire on August 28, 2008, 08:03:32 PM
Epic. Epic. EPIC!

Nice, fluffy, and deep. Just the way I like it! I commend you!

(However, this really isn't Zelda related. I'll just move it to GD. *moves*)
Title: Re: Her
Post by: Takun on August 29, 2008, 02:03:44 PM
Glad you liked it.