My script for the a new zelda game

[iastreb]

Look guys, i made a new story for a new zelda game, you must read this, before you write anything. i will write you only the first chapter, and if you like it i will write another( another thing, this game is for the revolution ;D)

                   The Legend of Zelda:
               Revolution of the New Hyrule

A long time ago the spirits stop a evil man to rull a peaciful land, and to stop himthey barried the world under the sea. But the people survived, and there was no memory for the great kingdom. But the evil man returned to concore the land under the sea, using the power of the mytical Triforce. But then a young hero rised, with a sword of light, he defited the evil one again. This hero traveled trought all the ocean, using the power of the winds, so he was could the hero of winds. Soon, after that, He travelled to the sea nobody have seen, to search for a new land. He found a new land, and with a beatiful princess, they start a bew kingdom, where people can live free and wihout worries.
Century have passed, and the kingdom was still there, peaceful. But nothing is forever, the evil man returned. He decide to destroy and rull the beatiful land. The people thought the spirits will stop the armies of evil creatures. But the spirits didn't help them... The evil man was king, but an evil king can stop the will of the people. There traditions remained. The evil king was immortal, because he found again his Triforce.
But the hope in the people remains...they now one day the hero will returned, giving light to the kingdom...

What do you think? ;D

[MagmarFire]

Hmm... Is the Master Sword in it? :D

[iastreb]

yeah, even if its in the ocean, but i dont no yet, do you want another chapter? 8)

[TP Zelda]

I DO! :D

[MagmarFire]

The Master Sword must return, man! ;D

[TP Zelda]

well duh  ::)

[iastreb]

ok,ok, but in all of us there's a little myiamoto,so...
there's some things you can read in the script:
- the Ocarina of Time will return
- There will be more species, both new and old
- the New Hyrule is big as the USA
- Laruto the sage will return
- the grafic will be as TWW
- the items will be revolutionery( like gunpowder, but there's not going to be guns )
- at the beggining of the game you can carry 1000 rupies, at the end: 50000. You can buy boats and horses.
- the Rito will be also in the game
- you must travel to every city in Hyrule, to organise a big revolution and fight with the others
- there will be the Ocarina of Time item select and ten swords and shields
- Link will travel trought time, but he will not age
- Ganondorf will be in his must powerfull form, and the Master Sword alone cant defite him this time
- anything else?

[MagmarFire]

Oooh...sounds epic. :)

[iastreb]

i now

[Nabooru]

It sounds a little blaze`

[newbkyng]

it all has a few too many typos.

[I_Flip_Vans]

A Few! haha just joking, i thought it was good, but yea, the typos, the typos, you have to fix. It would be a great story, if there werent any typos!!!

haha, well anyway, i thought it was real good! Just you went to far into the story like..."Soon, after that, He travelled to the sea nobody have seen, to search for a new land. He found a new land, and with a beatiful princess, they start a bew kingdom"

you went to fast from the part where he searches, and right after that he finds. Maybe say where he found it or how he met the princess, i dont think anyones that fast huh, well you know...

But overall it was a good story!

[Evilslayer]

You should do something about your own typos before complaining about other people's typos, methinks. :-*