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Started by Mysterious F., March 15, 2007, 04:30:09 PM

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Mysterious F.

Well, this is only previews of the next chapter for my stroy. I'll post the one that would be for this Chapter Ten:

Jin vs. Caton continues, and when Caton's strength is revealed, can Jin win? Or will he lose to the only won who experienced victory?

Then, Jack goes up against the second most powerful Blue Rupee Ranker. But what abilities does this character have?

Now here's Chapter Eleven's Preview:

Jack continues against Clowny, but Clowny is still very powerful. As the fight begins a climax, can Jack live against this goth themed clown, or be killed by this maniac?

Takun

Sounds interesting. Ch.11 sounded cool.
~Sincerely,
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Mysterious F.

12 preview:

As their battle reaches it's end, does Jack win or lose? Then, Alan begins his battle, but who does he face? And just what is happening outside of the castle?

Mysterious F.

13 preview:

Sebastian, the most powerful Blue Rupee Ranker, has appeared and challenged Alan! What powers does Sebastian possess? What powers does Alan have? And what happens when these two powers collide?

JDog

Sounds pretty sweet, can't wait till the actual story comes out. :D

Mysterious F.

#5
Umm, the story is up, here's the link:

My Story (In America)


Mysterious F.

Well then, I'll tell you a few things in the story that are irrelevant to the plot but I might as well tell you:

*Link has, basically, turned emo.
*The City in the Sky will be conquered by the next round.
*Link's farther isn't emo.
*Aqua is Link's age of 11, Leno's a 12, Alviss is 15, and the other 4 are 14.
*Caton has a secret.
and...
*This guy will appear after the Second Round (the current one) and will do something important, and a new hero is discovered.