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"The Master Sword Chronicles"...good enough for FF.net?

Started by MagmarFire, August 20, 2007, 08:47:43 PM

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MagmarFire

Something's been kind of bugging me lately, and that's wondering whether or not my fanfic is ready to be posted on FF.net. I feel that I need feedback on my story before posting to help make sure that it's in its top form.

You can find my story and its sequel here. You don't have to read it and/or give it feedback; I don't want it to seem like I'm forcing people... You guys don't even have to like it. Just constructive criticism.



Advanceshipping and Rion had better be Chuck Norris approved.

Fishalicious

I've only read one chapter of it, so far, but it's definitely FF.net material. I mean, if my stories get reviews, yours would be praised.

Critique? I don't have any, actually. The spelling is very good, and... well, I like the plot. Perhaps you could describe the characters a little bit more?

MagmarFire

Yay! Tips! :D

I'll be sure to add more descriptive...er, descriptions to the characters, then. Thanks for the tip! ;)



Advanceshipping and Rion had better be Chuck Norris approved.

DW

This is brilliant, it would be fine to put on there. In fact, maybe I should add it to the HC...
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MagmarFire




Advanceshipping and Rion had better be Chuck Norris approved.

DW

The way most fanfics are (yaoi...*shudder*) It's definitely in the top ten percent I've ever read. So yeah, seeing as how it's Zelda related, I could put it in the HC if you want.
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MagmarFire

Sweet! Go ahead. ;)

And pardon me for being naïve, but what is the HC, anyway?



Advanceshipping and Rion had better be Chuck Norris approved.

Keaton

I believe it stands for Hyrulean Compendium, or Hyrule's Compendium, or Compendium of Hyrule, or something like that.

MagmarFire

Ah, thank you, Tacheon. I couldn't find it in the Affiliates, so I had to ask. ;)



Advanceshipping and Rion had better be Chuck Norris approved.

DW

Quote from: Zaraki Kenpachi on August 24, 2007, 07:01:20 PM
I believe it stands for Hyrulean Compendium, or Hyrule's Compendium, or Compendium of Hyrule, or something like that.



I was wondering when I would be able to bust that pic out.

Anyways, not even close. What HC is is the Hyrule Chronicles, it's not a site in itself, but it's a section of the Library of Hyrulean Literature I opened in HA2, although you can really only get to it from the HA2 talk forums, but I'm working on that with RG. Right now, the only thing in it is the novelization of my storyline, JaR, or at least as far as we've gotten in it. I have been looking for some more material, and I think that could work. After all, it is in Hyrule...so yeah. You need to go to here,[url] and then send me or ZV a message and we'll set it up.
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MagmarFire

My apologies for being late. ???

But I posted it on FF.net...about five days ago. Yeah, I'm super late replying to this, aren't I? XD At any rate, since I got it up, will we need this topic anymore?



Advanceshipping and Rion had better be Chuck Norris approved.