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Let me take a crack at this....

Started by Impa, April 28, 2005, 07:55:33 AM

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Impa

I was bored in Science one day so here is a poem by that smart 13 yr old dork, me...

Ganon is a spider,
hung by a single thread,
The web of evil he creates,
The thread cannot be snipped,
Not even by the three "golden fates",
But, then a fairy boy clad in armor green,
appeared as if by magic,
with the sword of evil's bane,
He struck the spider with sacred arrows,  aplenty,
At that was when Ganon met his end,
For the sword of evil's bane was now a part of him.

Sorry, Ganny I still love yaz ;)!
Ganondorf:Shut up >:(.
Impa:*flinches* Y-yes sir :'(....
Please comment! ;D

weienw

Only when I stopped looking for rhymes did I start appreciating this ^_^.

Awesome work. Favorite lines:

QuoteAt that was when Ganon met his end,
For the sword of evil's bane was now a part of him.

oh, and...

QuoteSorry, Ganny I still love yaz

*grins*

Piksi

I love it! a great choice of words, and it fits in like a key. If only Ganon really was a spider, then Link could have just smooshed him! ;)

Impa

 ;DThankies!!!!!!!!!! I liked that part, too! I love spiders! They are fun to kill.

zeldafreak1997

Quote from: Impa on May 02, 2005, 07:38:59 AM
;DThankies!!!!!!!!!! I liked that part, too! I love spiders! They are fun to kill.
at camp we were in the woods and there was this spider with an egg sac and a kid said right in front of the teacher its fun to spit on oh and by the way good job!

Pickles

Great poem!! It's really cool. I wish I could write poems that good! ;)

Vampire

QuoteOnly when I stopped looking for rhymes did I start appreciating this ^_^.

Lol, that's exactly how I felt! It was really cool, once I realized that there was no rhythm! Very nice job!