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Started by oracle, January 24, 2007, 08:11:25 AM

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oracle

. Free verse, no pattern  
Daisy Dachshund


Daring, dimwitted, dachshund,
Like a wiener, and her bed is a bun.
Scared of bubbles, and seeing herself in a mirror.
Makes the carpet wet,
Seeks food and sneaks into the bin,
Hides things under her bed,
Treats, trash, toys,
Always goes for the nose.
Deer poo, cake, pizza, apple, bugs,
She eats anything she sees,
Eyes bigger then her stomach.  
RrrWoof, a sharp, loud bark,  
And she knows when she has done something bad,  
Jumps in bed, ears go back and wags her tail.
Smooth and rough,
Short and long,
Black and tan,
Fur.
And took herself into bed.

. Acrostic poem, the first letter in the poem is the name of my dog.




Dachshund
Annoying
Ignorant
Sausage
Yap


. Cinquain has five lines with syllable pattern.

Dachshund
Hungry, thirsty
Wirer, furry, skinny
Sneaking, shadow, in the darkness
Dakshunt

i love my dog very much

darkphantomime

What do you know, I also have a daschhound... heheh... he's about ten years old though...

oracle

i don't know how old she is but... i think she 7 months old

DW

you should do a haiku...
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Zelda Veteran

A Haiku is short, but can be packed full of deeper meaning.

My real Poison team in BW2. They all have perfect natures and EV's. I went the extra distance and bred the right IV's into them. Come at me bro.

oracle

Quote from: Shikamaru Nara on January 26, 2007, 05:50:07 PM
you should do a haiku...
no i have Free verse, Acrostic poem and Cinquain.

DW

yes, so why not haiku? haiku are fun...
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