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Sukotsutsu's rise in HA2

Started by Sukotsutsu, September 21, 2008, 04:59:08 PM

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Sukotsutsu

I just wanted to post in this so you guys/girls can tell me how I am doing.  seems to be my best topic I have. I would like more post in it and that people would attack the rogues! :o ??? :P

Commodore Axilon


Keaton


Hi no Seijin

Down at the bottom of the forums we have boards for HA2.  You should probably post your HA2 topics there in the future as very few of the regular TDC'ers are also members of HA2.
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Honestly, I avoid your topics. There isn't much creativity, and the sentences don't flow well. A lot of things are left vague and phrased badly so that I can barely tell what's even going on.

Another thing is the spelling, grammar, and switching between tenses. Although I really don't care that much about those things unless they're utterly horrific, they could use some work.

You do seem to have picked up how to do stat battles fairly early though.
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Sukotsutsu


darkphantomime


Keaton