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A Story Idea I need Help With.

Started by Takun, January 01, 2008, 06:03:02 PM

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Takun

Okay. I was thinking about writing a story called, The Desert Colossus. If thats okay with everybody, if so, then please dont take the idea. I was wondering if any one wanted me to include their characters from HA2 in it. If so just PM me or tell me in this topic.If so I will need a descripsion of your char. No stats are needed. Well tell me if its a good idea or no. If you want more on the story line just ask. :)
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o0Zelda0o

Well... In order to help you, I think we need the plot for the story, Whats it going to be about?
Action, Fantasy e.c.t
Main Character?

Uximadesk

Yeah, tell us more about the storyline, I'll end up giving you kalex anyway, but first I want to hear what it is about
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Fishalicious

...I don't really play HA2, so I can't really help out. D: But I'd be interested in reading it, yeah?

Zelda Veteran

Whats it going to be about? I don't think I'll lend you Dogura (I gave him an image, and I don't like the idea of him having a different personality) but I might lend you Darkin(my comic relief character).

My real Poison team in BW2. They all have perfect natures and EV's. I went the extra distance and bred the right IV's into them. Come at me bro.

Aureliano

You can use my Aureliano if you wish.

Takun

Mmkay. Well, you know how when you first go to the site how it says,
"Welcome brave traveller, you've reached the Desert Colossus, the last vestige of civilization in an otherwise uncivilized land. Here you can find a unique source of information, dedicated to exploring and charting the ever-expanding world of Hyrule"
Well I was just goin through the site out of boredome and happened to read this again and thought how the Dessert Colossus has almost EVERY tid bit on Hyrule. Even who Kaebora Gaebora(sp?) is. Imagine if Gannon got a hold on every secret that Hyrule holds? Or in this case his son. That would spell disaster. Basically Gannon's son seeks revenge on Hyrule for banishing the race of Gerudu from Hyrule. And while going through a library the son, Gonde, (pronounced like Gonday) stumbles upon a tale stating that there is a place that holds the knowledge of the
world. Even the spell to revive the old legend, Kaebora Gaebora(sp?). I have yet to come up with an idea on what he will find that may destroy Hyrule. But, anyway this is were the heros come in. I dont need too many, five maybe. Zelda's prophets interupt her and Link discussing plans for the kingdom to inform them that old monster that were once under Gannon's control are on the move again. Bringing along the suspect that he may be alive. They do not know that he had a son. Sending Link to destroy the menace of Gannon he returns many months later half dead. When he finally reaches Zelda all he can mange out is the word "Doom" before he dies. Enraged by this she sends out word to make a contest in which only the strongest heros may join. The winners are none other than the five heroes of the story. They are then ordered to take revenge on  Gannon.

Well, there ya go.
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Aureliano

#7
I think it is pretty cool, just give me a second to give you some constructive criticism.

Aureliano should be a winnar......just saying  ::)

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QuoteZelda's prophets interupt her and Link discussing plans for the kingdom to inform them that old monster that were once under Gannon's control are on the move again. Bringing along the suspect that he may be alive. They do not know that he had a son. Sending Link to destroy the menace of Gannon he returns many months later half dead. When he finally reaches Zelda all he can mange out is the word "Doom" before he dies.

I like the idea.

You will have to explain how Link returned (In HA2, he is gone), how Gonde came about, and stuff like that.   Also, why did you choose the owl?

Takun

Hehehehe, people WILL die. Just so ya know. But if u want your character in then just PM me their description. I'll try my best not to change their personality.
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DW

...You are Gannon-Banned SO hard...

Anyways, you have permission to use not Sabertache or Burlo, but Junter, Yassen, and Lerick. In case you need villains, you know.
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Takun

So your Saber! Thanks for all that help you gave me a few days ago. Im Tubora, you helped with my stats and gave me a copy of the rules! Anyway. Ok, thx Shika. Yeah, Ive been Gannon banned on other sites too.  ;)
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DW

lol, don't worry about it, it's merely for lulz.

No problem. So, any other questions?
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Takun

No not really, I pretty much got it down pat.
But with the Desert Colossus story I do need help. I need a motive. What will Gonde do with the infinite knowledge? Any ideas? Really Link is gone? I guess I missed that. Maybe it could be like, a uhhh, desendant or sumthin.
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Aureliano

Gande can find out what happened to his pop's, or his tribe, or the history of his people/Hyrule/Link/Triforce?Goddesses

Uximadesk

Quote from: KingPyramidHead on January 05, 2008, 09:06:42 PM
What will Gonde do with the infinite knowledge? Any ideas?
Well, I guess having some powerful ancient artifact location would be too much of a cliche, but what are we going to do about it? ;)
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