Kakariko Wind

[Zelda Veteran]

[Thanks guys, Ill have chapter 8 up ASAP

[Zelda Veteran]

Just to clarify, i have NOT left you guys hanging. Microsoft Word was wiped out when we had the computer cleaned. I may attempt to write the next chapter using only TDC reply box. Perhaps later, you'll be hit with another chapter. Again, sorry for leaving you guys there.

[TP Zelda]

I [size=10]SUCK[/size] at stories! That's why I think you're so good ZeldaVet.

[Zelda Veteran]

lmao. All I saw at first was SUCK and I was like dang!! I'm only good because I have so much practice. There are some very good writers at HA2, and hanging around with them, it must have rubbed off on me.

[TP Zelda]

L-O-L!!!! I seriously suck, I'll write a story and you have to read it.

[Mysterious F.]

For some reason, I feel the characters I lacking personality, and the story moved too fast. But that's just me, a serious writer. (And reader    )

[Zelda Veteran]

Lacking personality? Thats what I focus on man!!

[Zelda Veteran]

Chapter 8
::The winding path::
With the squadrin of Moblins vanquished, Link stepped over the bodies, and lead the group into the forest where they walked for about 10 minutes before stumbling onto a dirt path. "Stop." Rendd called from behind the group. Rendd meandered around the group, and stopped on the path. Knealing down, he examined the spot which would support Link's next step. Standing up, he drew his sword, and cut the air beneath Link's feet.

A snapping was heard all around them, and a CRASH was heard as the warriors ducked in cover. Feet from them, two large loggs had collided with eachother, and were embeded into eachother. Link stared in amazement. the Hylian glanced at Rendd, who caught it, and smiled. "What can I say, rather then be more careful." With a warm smile, Link commended him, and the group continued forward, this time with Rendd leading them.  The path was long, winding, and riddled with traps. Rendd seemed to be an expert at disarming traps, or so Dingo decided watching the man's movements.

After what seemed like an hour of walking, Rendd stopped the group once more, and dissapeared into the tree tops. Rebon dissapeared with the wind as well, most likely following Rendd. Link and Dingo looked at eachother confused. It seemed like a hellish eternity before the duo returned with a status report. Rendd stepped forward. "Well, we've found Majora's base of opperations!" This brought smiles to everyone's faces, including Rendd who couldnt help but let a smile creep over his face. "There are Bremon Masked warriors lining the outside of the fortress. There is only one entrance to the base, and that is straight through the wall of Masked Warriors.

To this, Dingo smiled, and unsheathed his massive BroadSword. "Aye! Then lets give em' hell!" He shouted. Rebon brought a finger to his lips in a sharp quick motion. "Ssshhhh... They're just beyond those trees!" He pointed past the trees in front of them, and rested his finger in the direction of a thick assortment of trees a few yards from them. Rendd picked up a stick, and carefully carved through the mud to show their possition. Link rubbed his chin, and overlooked the situation. "... Are they armed?" Link quizzed, looking over the map once more. Rebon nodded. "With spears and Bows. I would say about a third of them are armed with Bows." Dingo stepped around the map, and peeked through the trees. "Aye... He speaks the truth." Link stood up, and snatched the stick from Rendd. He could have just asked... the samurai thought, stepping around side the map.

Link pointed at Rebon with the stick. "You think you could sneak up behind one of them undetected?" Rebon rolled his eyes. "Dont insult me. I can take out at least three before Im noticed." Link
grinned. "Overconfidence could be your downfall. Work on that." Rebon glared at Link. "Dont preach to me, boy!" He snarled, Dingo returning to the area. Alright, Rebon, if you can take out three archers, you would more than earn your keep. Rendd, if you can take out as many archers as possible with your speed, that would be perfect!" Rendd grinned. "I dont like to brag, but I may save you all the trouble of dealing with any of them." Link frowned. "Are you all that confident? Am I the only one having issues here?" Dingo laughed, and patted Link on the back. Link pointed at Dingo with the muddy stick. "After Rebon and Rendd break the long range forces, you and I can deal with the hand to hand combat!" Dingo starred at his reflection in his large sword. "No problem mate!" With this, the group set up into formation, and prepared to launch the assult!

[I did this entirely in TDC's reply box, so if there are spelling mistakes, I apologize.

[Zelda Veteran]

Chapter 9
:: Assult on the base...?::

Link surveyed the area, as Rebon and Rendd nodded to eachother from the top of the trees. The plan snapped into motion, as the Bremon archers were attacked! The guards were dropping like flies, as the deadly duo made a bloody mess around the area. Link drew the Master Sword out of his sheath, and charged out of the trees along side Dingo. The battle was on, as Dingo smashed straight into one of the four Bremon Guards, shoving his massive sword through the man. The man's screams faded away, as his life force dissipated.

Link was surrounded by the other three guards. They all charged in, spears pointed inward. "Heh." Link chuckled, as he unleashed the Hurricane Spin! The guards were sent spiraling outward, as they landed on the ground with a thud. With the guards vanquished, Link dusted himself off, and re-grouped with Rebon, Rendd, and Dingo. Rendd snickered. "Job well done. Exelent plan Link of Hyrule." Link pushed a finger to his lips, as his Hylian ears twitched. "Voices..." Link whispered. "Dingo, give me a lift." He extended his finger to a point high up on the base.

There were ledges all along side the base, with few windows. It was held by pillars that seemed to be the main support beams for the fortress. Dingo kneeled and clasped his hands. Link stuck his right boot in the Knight's large hands. "On three mate." Dingo whispered. "One, two..." He paused. "Three!" Dingo lifted with all of his might, and link was sent soaring over the intended target, and instead was sent crashing through a window. Rebon's personality never seemed to change. He was always calm, and quiet. Rendd on the other hand glared at Dingo. "You big oaf!! You dont even know your own strength!" Dingo placed a hand over his face in shame.

"Alright, shall we retrieve the little bugger?" Dingo muttered, advancing towards the door. Rendd and Rebon followeed suit, and walked through the open doorway. The inside was bigger than it had looked from the outside. There were stairs going up each floor, and doors branching off from the floors. Each floor was visible as it was just a big winding staircase leading to each walkway. The group surveyed the surroundings, and crept along the wall. rebon was silent, as was Rendd, but Dingo had heavy foot steps. "Dingo, could you be a little quiter?" rebon asked, sounding rather peeved. "Aye, its me armor! Do you know how heavy this stuff is mate?" Rendd sighed. "You'll have to leave it here. Just hide it behind those boxes." He pointed to a bunch of crates that were stacked along the wall. The knight untied his armor, and set it behind the crates. He was still a little noisy, but it helped.

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"Uuughh...." Link awoke, rubbing his head. "Where am I?" He looked around the room. It looked like a dungeon. It was lined with grey bricks, and torches lined the hallway which lead to his cell. "He was shackled, and imprisoned. "Damnit Dingo!" He cried, trying desperately to free himself from the shackled, which were wrapped tightly around his ankles. His sword, shield, and weapons were all missing from his tunic. Oh, thats great, we're obviously dealing with somebody smarter than Ganondorf this time. He thought, looking around the room for an escape.

Suddenly, a voice other than his own cut through the air. "There is no escape... I suggest you dont even try." Link whirled around, to see a man cloaked in shadow stnding just beyond the bars of the cell. "Who are you? Where am I?" Link quizzed, never taking his eyes off the man. "Wouldnt you like to know?" Asked the man, glaring at Link. Link gritted his teeth. "I demand an answer!!" The Hylian screamed. The man only chuckled, and watched Link struggle. "Very well..." The man stepped out of the shadows...

[Takun]

I like how the story is getting much darker and steadily more sinister. How about including more points of the shadow sheikah? I highly recommend adding some parts and ideas of the dark history of Kakariko and the Sheikah.

I also finished your other fanfic. It was nice, but there were quite a few continuity errors. In fact, Impa was said to be killed by Ganon, but she then appears as a sage... Also The current work seems to be far more organized and neat. I noticed a grave lack of quotation marks in  the other one. But now, this one is getting much better...

Now for some trulyy crazy stuff! Onwards with the tale!

That might be hard, just because of how little we know about the Sheikah. But Great story man

[Mysterious F.]

You do have alot of gramical errors, but it's very good. Get working on it! I started after you, and I'm more chapters ahead, and I have ALOT to write. And there are several plot twists, too. On mine, that is.

[Takun]

I think you should make the two Sheikah a little weaker.

[Mysterious F.]

Like how anime characters should be weaker in American versions because American anime producers are dumb enough to keep out blood and deaths?

Seriously, they ruin anime that way.

A little weaker would be nice, but I'm fine how it is.

[Takun]

It's just that they seem to be invincible due to their speed. It would just be nice for them not to be able to take out everything without breaking a sweat.

And what race is Dingo? Is he from one of the Zelda Games?

[Mysterious F.]

No, he's from ZV's previous story. You'll have to read it to get this a little.