Tingle and the Nightmere

[Princess Ruto]

In the middle of now where was a small  bungalo and a man called tingle lived there .Nobody liked tingle because he dressed in weird clothes and walked funny and always belived a fairy would come to him but all that was wrong well that was what tingle thought but what do you think .do you think he dresses weird and walks funny but one thing out of the the three was that tingle did belive that a fairy will come to him .

Well back to the story .Once on a stormy night tingle was getting ready for bed and as he climbed in bed the wind was so strong that tingle roled out of bed and landed flat on his face .He got back in bed and after an hour or so he fell a sleep withen a wink of an eye (if you get my meaning) .he slept and slept and while he was sleeping something or someone sneaked in to his bungalo and sneaked into his bed room and at the right moment the thing or the someone shouted BOO and tingle screamed like a girl really loudly and fell on the floor and he noticed that there was a thing standing right beside him .

"thought you could get away from me this easily tingle as people say you can run but you can't hide from your worst nightmere "said the thing with a spooky tine added to it so it sounded all ghostly .

" what do you meen " asked tingle with a wimpery voice

" what do i meen well you should no or are you that stupid "

"im not stupid "tingle said back and he got up and shoved the night mere so hard that the night mere got so angry he made it into a worst night mere anyone could ever think of .

In the morining tingle had gotten a new makover and his face had 2 large boils and on his nose he had a large spot and his toes were over grown and he had some rotten wings on his back and much worse things in every over place of his body .Tingle was now misreble for the rest of his life and finally after all these years a fairy came to him and made tingle into a young hadsome man again (well lets forget the handsome part out lets just say he was back to normal with his tingleish ways) .

The end

With my opion i think this was not as good as the one called Tingle the Hero  but i think i have done better and other things .So what do you think of that .

[Sabatta]

are you like 3 or soemthing? cus dang i dont meen to be harsh but that was pretty bad 8)

[Hi no Seijin]

Again, you need to work on grammar and spelling.

[Sabatta]

what i accidently mispelled something(Mainly due to my fat fingers >:() and plz dont start yaking to me about grammer, when you play WoW for as long as i have the typeing style starts to rub off on you >:(

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[Hi no Seijin]

Sorry, I was talking to Princess Zelda.  I guess I should've said that in my first post.

[Sabatta]

My apologies Hi no Seijin