My Next Story (I won't quit this time)

[Mysterious F.]

Well, I'm planning on a new story. No details explained, except it begins with Link returning to Hyrule after leaving Termina. Unless you played every Zelda game, it is very difficult to understand.

[Baka Nezumi]

Anymore details you can spare?

[Mysterious F.]

Nope.  :)

I'll probably have the first chapter by the end of the day, then you'll understand the story pretty much.

[Mysterious F.]

Here comes chapter one:

Chapter One

   Everyone was sitting down, all of them wearing white robes with hoods that covered all of their bodies except their upper faces, so they could see. Even their upper faces, though, could not be seen, do to the hoods, which cast a shadow over their face.
   Even if you the shadow weren't there, however, you wouldn't be able to see their faces where they were. They were in a small cave, very dark, and a small bit damp. The only light at all came from one of the nine people sitting in the cave, who resonated both a red and blue light.
   "When will our Leader get here?" one of them, apparently tired of waiting, asked to break the silence of the area. This one was the second smallest of them all, and from the hole where this one's upper face is, two large, yellow eyes resonated an eerie glow that was very disturbing. The voice was very childish.
   "He'll be here soon enough," replied one from the other side of the room. The voice from that body was very deep and haunting, and apparently a male voice. He was, although not the tallest one here, very tall. "He had some business to take care of. Very important business we can't avoid."
   "We can't start this meeting without him," a third voice said. This one was female, and from the hole came a small bit of bright red hair blocking one of her eyes. She seemed to be creepy. "And if this is delayed any longer we will never succeed."
   "But whatever it is, it must be..." Resonated yet another voice from the shadows.
   They all turned their attention to where the voice was coming from. From the shadows appeared a tenth white-robed figure. His voice was younger than most of the others, only sounding like he was in his late teens. Still, the voice had a largely mysterious flow to it, but in a very polite manner.
   "...important, don't you think?" The person finished, still walking forward toward the rest of them. "Sorry my being late bothers you, but what I was doing was more serious than you think."
   "So you finally showed up." echoed the voice that earlier asked where he was. "So, just what were you doing that is so special?"
   The tenth robed figure remained silent, not wanting to reveal what kept him so long.
   "Go on, tell us." a new voice worded from the one that glowed the red and blue lights. This one was old and haggy, and definitely female. From her robe came two noses, very pointy and long. Unlike the others, also, she had four eyes looking around from inside of the robe.
   "Yes." the voice continued, but in a way that seemed like it was talking to herself. "We would like to find out what has delayed your appearance."
   The tenth robed figure finally got tired of waiting and finally answered their cries.
   "I was following the very person we all want to kill." He said, and then very slowed followed his statement with the name "Link."
   They all then became much more interested in what he was saying. One of them even let out a small gasp.
   "You mean," another voice said. This one came from the least tallest person in the room, and this one voice was a little squeaky, and it was clearly angry. "You were following him this entire time and didn't tell us?!"
   "Relax." answered the voice questioned. "It was a good chance to see how he's grown. Besides, now that we know..."
   This voice once again said this slowly, but not as slow as before.
   "In two months, all of our goals, including Link's death, will be accomplished.

[Baka Nezumi]

You have a couple of grammatical errors, that changed the meaning of the sentence a bit. Other than that it was good.

[Mysterious F.]

What were they?

[Baka Nezumi]

In the 1st sentence, 2nd paragraph there is a grammatical mistake.
You spelled robed wrong, you said robbed like robber.
You spelled many words wrong. Use spell-check.

[Mysterious F.]

Okay, I'm writning a different story now:

Prequel[/b]

Bla Bal Bal, explains OOT and MM, then Link returns to Hyurle 10, and:

When he returned, however, he realized something; his Triforce of Courage was gone. The Triforce was made purely to exist only in Hyrule, and when Link moved out of it, the Triforce had to leave him.
  Without Navi, without the Triforce of Courage, without the Master Sword, and without the friends he once had, who believed he died; Link was tormented. He had lost a reason to live and even considered suicide.
  Then, one day, a man had walked up to this poor child. With blond hair like Link's and a shadowy look in his eyes, he told him that his questions could be answered if he followed him to the Temple of Time. Link, not knowing what to do, followed him, and his life changed in a way that would lead to Hyrule as it is today.
  The man turned out to be Link's father, who was actually alive, and the person who died was only someone who looked like him. He was the secret leader of an organization of powerful criminals called the Evil Crime Syndicate, which was a 20 member criminal organization planning to conquer Hyrule. Link's father then picked up the Master Sword and used a power that Link had never used with it, his father released a giant wave of energy that destroyed the temple. He then turned to his son, telling him that he was weak and that the only way to change that was to follow him and conquer Hyrule. Link had decided to follow him. Without the Master Sword or the Triforce, and with the neglectors who had uncared for him influencing his life, he had discovered the thirst for power that was in him all along. Link had betrayed everything he once thought mattered and his soul became corrupted.
  The Evil Crime Syndicate then proceeded to conquer Hyrule, and had captured a member of a group called the Desert Colossus named Shikamaru Nara. All seemed to be successful, when one day Shikamaru was rescued and their headquarters, a small cave on the northeastern mountain, was destroyed. Shikamaru then told his fellow members descriptions of the criminals and his terrifying experience there.
  Deciding to have some fun, the Link's Father ordered his second in command to spread the message across Hyrule that the Syndicate was hosting a competition. They asked for anyone who wanted to destroy the Evil Crime Syndicate to come to Hyrule Castle and fight them. Many wishing to destroy their tormentors went, but they were challenged by a preliminary test to defeat a servant of the syndicate. Even though the best of Hyrule's former army couldn't pass this test, seven people did pass.




I originally planned ofr a long, simply wonderful three page story explaining OOT, MM, and this, (this part is only 1 page) but the post was too long.

Yes, that is the member Shikamaru Nara, and we are hte group. The only reference to the sitye in the stroy.

Sorry so many spelling maistake outside the sorey, but I have been writning for an hour and I'm really... I shouldnt' use thatr word.

[Baka Nezumi]

I liked it, you spelled father wrong every time you used the word.

[Mysterious F.]

Really. The way it sounds you think it has an R before the T. And I'm not a speller.

[Mysterious F.]

Chapter One: Introducing...

  "Congratulations on beating the preliminaries." Said a small midget coming out of the shadows next to the seven victors. "I'm Pumpernickel, and I'll be the ref for the competition."
  The seven of them each looked at this mysterious character, and wondered what would happen to them. It was quite a scene; seven people who probably didn't know each other were going to fight the most powerful criminals in existence. I remember that day easily; I was in the shadows, watching them, and perplexing what would happen to them. I can remember their appearances just as easily.
  They were all lined up in a line, each one standing side to side from another. The one on the far right could be called the most perplexing of all of them. He had long, light brown hair that went down to his upper back, and was wearing a strange business suit, one that had feathers wear the shoulders were. His personality and actions also amazed me; stuttering speech, girlish behavior, and never having been afraid to show his emotions, he was considered insane by some villagers. He's powerful, more powerful than I could have imagined. He maybe about 14, possibly 13, it was hard to tell.
  Then there was the next to him; on his left was a kid also his age that was also weird looking. He had very long, black spiky hair maybe 5 ½ inches long. Wearing black pants and weird tennis shoes with a small Triforce symbol on them, combined with his white shirt with long sleeves, he looked more modern than possible for Hyrule. His personality was also amazing, he was always serious, and possibly had a dark attitude that wanted power. You could tell just by looking at his eyes he had a reason to be here.
  Next was a pretty girl wearing a sea themed pink ball dress, covered in seashells and corals and such stuff from the sea. She also was wearing a large, curly seashell on her head as a hat, covering most of her blond hair, and on her face was a small starfish painting on her left cheek. She was smiling, and the way she smiled suggested she was always happy.
  Then was her brother, in the middle, who also had blond hair. He had his set in a spiky fashion, though not as spiky as the one earlier. He looked nothing else like her, wearing a large jacket with a neckband that covered his lower face, so only his eyes were visible. He had a personality mostly serious, but not overly so, and could actually be happy.
  To his left was a boy with a brown sage robe, and holding a wooden cane with a small, tiny tree coming out that was the size of a book. He had brown hair, and a perpetually rather, slightly dumb expression on his face. His personality was cheerful and short tempered.
  Then there was another boy to his left. Forget what I said earlier, HE was the most modern of them all. With blue spiky hair and a blue cap covering a lot of it, his head alone looked strange. He was wearing light blue shorts and a yellow shirt with short sleeves only going down to his elbows; he was almost a circus freak. He was smart, though, and powerful, more than any of the others that passed.
  Finally there was a red haired boy with extremely pointy ears and an extremely happy personality. He was wearing a very large white shirt almost too big for him, and white, poofy Arabian style pants. He was very cheerful.
  "Well then, people!" Pumpernickel yelled to an audience that suddenly appeared, they were just late to come watch them fight. "These are the ones who passed, from right to left: Rolan, Alviss, Aqua, Leno, Jack, Alan, and Jin!"

[Baka Nezumi]

I liked this chapter more than the Prolouge. Why is his name Pumpenickel?

[Mysterious F.]

I don't know, I just felt like it.  :P

[Mysterious F.]

I want to mention this, but this is Hyrule Castle they are fighting at. It's become the Evil Crime Syndicate's base of operations.

[Mysterious F.]

Chapter Two: Round One begins!

"Well then, Round One will start tomorrow." Pumpernickel announced to the audience and the contestants. "It will be three of the Evil Crime Syndicate members against three of these seven contestants in one on one matches. The one with the most victories wins, but even if one of them wins two matches before the third takes place, we still fight all the matches. The rules are simple: you will fight in an arena, fall out of it, surrender, die, or if I judge you cannot go on, you lose. If two matches were one by one fighting team, and the other by the other, then only the contestant from the team who won one battle who won the battle may go on to fight for that team, the other two can no longer fight. Well then, I suggest you choose who fights tomorrow."
  "I'm fighting." Alviss immediately told the six others, right when Pumpernickel stopped talking, in an extremely you-can't–stop-me-from-doing-so tone.
  "So will I." Leno said.
  "I will to!" Aqua proclaimed with a very happy tone.
  "Alright then." Pumpernickel responded, and quickly took out a piece of paper from his jacket and wrote their names on it. Next to their names were three others names: Caton, Ian, and Pano.
  "Hey!" Jack yelled at the three, apparently annoyed. "I wanted to fight tomorrow!"
  "There will be other opportunities." Pumpernickel exclaimed. "So, just be patient."
  Jack let out an angered "HMPH!" and turned his head in the opposite direction from Alviss, Aqua, and Leno.
  "Well then, some servants will lead you to your rooms." A man dressed in a black robe with a hood shadowing his face that suddenly appeared mentioned to the contestants.
  "We get rooms?" Rolan asked with an incredibly happy tone. "YAY!"
  This is when Alviss suddenly turned around and walked away, when another robed man came and led him to his room.
  Meanwhile, watching from the audience was a man just a few years older than the fighters was watching them. He was wearing a gray mask with eyeholes covered in one-way vision glass, so his eyes were not visible. He had black spiky hair, and was wearing a white jacket, decorated with a few military badges wear his left chest was, that had stretched to his feet, though it opened where the waste was. This figure had black pants and had modern businessman's shoes on. Staring at them with great interest, when Alviss left he suddenly disappeared from the crowd.
 
 
  The next day, Alviss, Leno, and Aqua had walked into the arena where the fights would take place, with Pumpernickel already waiting for them. Rolan, Jack, Alan, and Jin were in a special section of the audience reserved for them that had a very good view from the arena.
  The gate on the other side of the arena opened, and three black robed figures stepped out. None of them had faces that could be seen, so what they looked like was a mystery.
  "Alright." Pumpernickel said to these six fighters. "We will now start today's matches. Keep in mind that this could also be considered a death match, so try to stay alive. Now then, who will go first?"
  Alviss then stepped onto arena, while an enemy walked onto it at the same time.
  "Round One: Match One: Alviss vs. Ian! Begin!" Pumpernickel yelled, while the opponent suddenly removed the cloak he was wearing and revealed his identity.