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Loss of the Hero

Started by violinist, April 16, 2007, 05:50:45 AM

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violinist

April 16, 2007, 05:50:45 AM Last Edit: April 16, 2007, 01:26:48 PM by Din
Note: This is in the first person of Nabooru, and I'm changing it so when Link's fighting, Zelda's in the Sacred Realm.
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                                   Chapter One: The Loss


    Everyone was pacing. But me. They were woried  about Link. The kid had fair sword skills when I was fighting him. Rauru was doing telepathy, or some kind of magic to watch Link.
    "Why are you fussing so much? The kid's fine!" I asked. everyone ignored me but Zelda, who shot me death glares.
    "Princess! Sorry to offend your boyfriend, but he's still a kid! And so are you!" Ruto and Zelda both glared at me this time.
    "Impa, do something!" begged Zelda. Impa glanced over to me. I pretended she didn't exist. Stupid Sheikah...
    "Nabooru, we're all tense, and-" she began.
    "All? As in, everyone? I'm sure not." I said, but before I could finish making Impa regret meeting me, Rauru said, "Our hero has fallen."
   

violinist

#1
April 18, 2007, 06:17:38 PM Last Edit: April 20, 2007, 01:45:52 PM by Din
                      Chapter Two: What the Din?

    Saria started wailing. Zelda started crying quietly. Ruto watched the two and joined in. Then, out of the blue, the floor opened and a little girl jumped. It was Ganondorf's daughter. I stood in shock for a second.    
    "BLOODY DIN! FAYLA!?" I screamed. Impa glanced at me. "WHAT THE DIN ARE YOU DOING HERE!?!?" I bellowed. Fayla smiled.
    "Well, I wasn't going to let you have all the fun by yourself." she said. I noticed I got a twitch in my eye.
    "Fayla, do you know where I was for the past seven years?" I asked sweetly. Fayla shook her head.
    "I was an Iron Knuckle. want to know why?" Fayla nodded.
    "Your daddy's orders." I snarled. Fayla just smiled and sat down on my Spirit Symbol next to me.
    "So, what's going on? I heard crying." she asked. I grimaced and ignored her. "Oh, the Hero died?" she asked.
    "Yeah, and somthing else oucurred to me. What about Link's Triforce?" I asked. All I got were blank stares.

ohmygoodgollygosh

#2
April 19, 2007, 04:47:00 PM
Nicely written, and with an interesting plot.  Well done!  Please continue?

dawnsummers12

#3
April 20, 2007, 01:44:52 PM
Yay! You have Fayla in it!  ;D Good Job by the way.

Fierce Deity Link

#4
April 24, 2007, 12:53:57 PM
Must...red...MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRREEEEEEE!!!

violinist

#5
April 24, 2007, 01:36:06 PM Last Edit: May 05, 2007, 08:47:21 AM by Violinist
Thanks guys. I'll be adding more soon. But I gotta go in a minute.

EDIT: Here it is.

           Chapter Three: The Holder of the Triforce

    The light breeze that always seemed not to be there. Zelda sat deep in thought. Finnally she spoke.
    "We'll need to channel the Triforce. It shall go to whoever is found worthy. Now stand up. Focus your powers on the Triforce."
    We all stood up, except Fayla who smirked at me. I gave her a small kick. As all the sages stood in deep silence, my stomach suddenly began hurting very badly. I fell down to the ground holding it. Then my right hand opened and began bleeding. Then, as fast as it started, it stopped. My stomach stopped hurting, and the gash on my hand healed, leaving a Triforce. Then, Ganondorf's cackle rang in the air like a guay's scream.
    "Very nice, Nabooru. But is it enough?"

xarlote

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xarlote

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June 03, 2024, 05:53:59 AM
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xarlote

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