poster...type...thing....

[HylianHero92]

So I was procrastinating form writing the next chapter of "Valley of the Deluge" and I decided to make this..... well I don't know what to call it actually, so I'll call it a poster for now. Here it is:

It's supposed to be underwater, btw (in case you couldn't tell  )

Does anybody like it?

[Keaton]

Very good idea, but it's too wide fora poster and the text could stand to be more... water-y...

[cacturnerules]

That's cool how the pages are floating around underwater.

Maybe you'd want to make the papers and tittle more like, wavy, and add a tint of blue to emphasize that they're underwater.

[HylianHero92]

add a tint of blue to emphasize that they're underwater.

I did. They used to be a lot brighter. 

[HylianHero92]

How about this?

I added some mountains in the background too.

[The Glamour Nazi]

Well the mountains don't need snow on them but yeah it's better.

[cacturnerules]

That's awesome! Much better than the first. The waviness makes it work.

[HylianHero92]

Well the mountains don't need snow on them but yeah it's better.

Well you don't need to be so picky....

[The Glamour Nazi]

Lol I said it was good.

I didn't mean it like that.

[MagmarFire]

That is very well done. The blue tint and greater refraction helped it out a lot.

[HylianHero92]

Lol I said it was good.

I didn't mean it like that.

I was only joking too. No hard feelings.

[HylianHero92]

I've just added some softglow for a isolated effect:

[The Glamour Nazi]

Oooohh... Artful...

[Keaton]

Looks even better.

Now all you have to do is change that text <_<

[HylianHero92]

Looks even better.

Now all you have to do is change that text <_<

What is that supposed to mean?!