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Started by TP Zelda, March 29, 2006, 10:24:02 PM

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medli

i can't complain,that was very good. much more detailed! good work.don't bother puttin it on the sites
right then:
they walked down the steep paths to kakiriko. summer held the keaton in her arms and stroked it's golden fur. "how rare...for a keaton to be so calm with a hylian" said kiley. "you just have to be gentle with them. not just catch them in nets and strip them from their fur like those savages do." said summer. "what savages?...oh,you mean the carpenters? they've been doing that for ages now. it's kinda like a tradition." he said. summer sighed. "never mind. we're not letting this one out of our sight." she said.
soz.that's all i could think of :(
u have a go

TP Zelda

that was soooooooo cute!

medli


TP Zelda

okay. then im gonna post them on webbies!


"No we're not!" said Kiley "That guy seemed wierd Kiley." "Yeah, he did. Ill walk u home then I'll go and make the cute little Keaton a bed, some blankets to cover it up, and some toys. Okay?" "Okay!" said Summer. When Summer got home, Breeze, Zelda, and Link adored the Keaton. "What do u want to name it?" asked Breeze. "I don't know. I already named Goldie Goldie." They thought of what to name her, (the Keaton) until they fell asleep. When Summer woke up, Kiley was there with the cute little Keatons stuff. Malon made her some little clothes. And Summer had a brush to brush her out with! Summers frineds came over and when Summer opened the door with Kiley, her frineds thought Kiley was the most handsomest teen they had ever seen. Then they looked in Summers arms. there was the little Keaton getting a bottle of milk. "Where ever did u get that?" asked April. "I got her from someone in Kakiriko Village. The guy said her mother abandoned her." (sorry, i just thought of that part) "Can I hold her? asked Breeze. "Okay." Summer handed the Keaton to Breeze. It started whining. "Oh, I think she wants me. I think she loves me to much to be held by someone else." The Keaton licked Summers  face. " Awwwwwwww!" said Summers friends. They went to Gerudo Foretress to show the girls the Keaton. They spent all day at the Gerudos. When it was night they brought the Keaton to Moon. Moon talked to the Keaton. "The keaton says that her mother never loved her. Thats why she abandoned her. And she also says that she loves u so much Summer, that she never want to leave u. And that u give her delisous milk! Thats all she says." "Wow! Tell her i love her that I never want to leave her." Moon told the Keaton. The Keaton jumped out of Moons hands a snugled up agaisnt Summer.



how do u like it? what should the Keatons name be Medli? okay, u have a go

medli

hhmm......wat to call it? is it a girl? well it has to be a mystical name if it's in the zelda times.....how's bout salia? it's like saria bout with a l in it
kiley walked summer home with salia in her arms. as they approached the castle,summer stopped. "what's wrong?" asked kiley. "you shouldn't stay here. the guards will not allow you to go any futher. but....tomorow,we can meet in hyrule field." she said,kissed his cheek and walked up the path. kiley watched her go. "princess,your parents are worried about you. you should go inside quickly." said one of the guards. she did so. in the dining hall,zelda and link were sitting at the long table,with a worried expression. "mother? father?" said summer. they looked at her and smiled. "summer! my little girl!" said zelda as she ran up to her and hugged her. "summer...your friends and us have been missing you." said link. "what do you mean? i haven't gone anywhere." laughed summer. "you're spending too much time with that boy from the ranch."said zelda. "please,we hardly see you anymore. just have a break from being with him."she added.
ur turn

miko


TP Zelda

#36
thats such u cute name! alright, so:

"Alright, I'll go tell him. :'(" "Tell him u can't see him for a month." "Okay :'(." Summer went to go tell Kiley. They kissed each other good-bye. Kiley kissed Salias nose. Salia licked Kiley. Summer went home. Summer and Kiley had fun while apart. Summer went to Kakiriko Village to do the gold skulltulla game. Salia even helped! Summer just thought of somethng. "Girl Keatons are very rare. I wonder how that guy got a hold on this one. And there very hard to catch!" thought Summer. Salia whined. "What is it Salia?" Salia cut one of her paws on one of the spikes on one of the gold skulltullas back! "I have to take u home and get that paw fixed up! Summer asked one of the guys to hold the recordof how many skulltullas she had killed. He promised he would. When Sumer got home, Zelda asked why she was in such a hurry. Summer showed her. Zelda hurried to get her Aid Kit. They put some soothing cold goo on the wound. Then they wrapped it up. Salia licked her hurt paw. Summer cradled Salia in her arms. Salia got some nice warm milk. Pretty soon Salia feel asleep. Summer told her mom and dad that dream she had about sailing to an island called Outset. Link said he has a nephew who lived on that island! A  couple hours later, Salia woke up. "Hello sleepy-head!" said Summer. Summer picked up Salia. Meanwhile in Lon Lon Ranch, Kiley was helping a horse give birth. The baby was a girl. He named it Summer. That night, Link told Zelda, Summer, and Salia the stories about his nephew on Outset. And Links nephew had a sis. Her name was Aryll. Before bed, Summer took Salia upstairs to Summers room. Salia watched Summer make Salias bed. Salia would growl if she didnt like it. and she would walk into it if she liked it. On the first time, Salia liked it. Then when Salia was in bed, Summer covered Salia up. Then Summer got in bed. Breeze had a pet rabbit. Summers kittens had grown up, alot!

To Be Continued By Medli...
how do u like it? okay, ur turn medli!

medli

nice! even though....kiley and summer were true lovers,why did they have fun while apart? i'll have to do this another time,i'm trying to think of what would happen.

TP Zelda

i dont know why they had fun while apart. guess i wasnt thinking. ur turn.

medli

ok.get ready to feel the tears:
summer sat on her balcony wall,stroking salia in her arms. from the balcony,she could see all the beautiful parts of her kingdom.....including lon lon ranch. she sighed as she looked at hyrule field,where they first met. she missed the touch of kiley's lips and his cheerful laugh. meanwhile,in lon lon ranch, kiley sat on the fence of the running area,missing that sweet scent of summer's hair. he gazed up at the cloudless,vast sky. "i know you miss her,but.....her parents just miss her." said malon,from behind him. "i remember when i first met her father......such a sweet boy. then,he become the most handsome man."she added. "aw,mom.i just want to feel her soft skin again. that scent that always seemed to waft up my nose." he said. "oh kiley,you'll meet her again. true love never fails." she said then went to sweep up the stables. "i just want you back,summer. i want you back." he sighed,as tears dropped from his forest green eyes.

miko


TP Zelda

cool! forest green eyes! my turn:

Summer went to Lake Hylia to swim. she stayed in the shalow part so Salia could swim a little. summers bathing suite looks like this: the top is like, say, strapless. the bottom part is like, dunno. (its a 2 part bathing suite.) Summer told her father and mother she was going swimming. Meanwhile, in Lon Lon Ranch, Kiley told his mom and dad he was going swimming at Lake Hylia too! Kiley was on the opposite side from Summer. (that means he was on the other side behind her.) Kiley caught a whif of her hair. He knew she was around somewhere. He looked all around the lake. He saw somebody with a Keaton. He swam over. He said hello. Summer jumped. "Kiley? Is that... u?" "Yep. What happened to Salias paw?" "Well, we were playing the gld skulltula game. And Salia somehow cut her paw on one of the spikes on the back of one of the gold skulltullas." "Oh, that must have really hurt!" "Well, I have to go Kiley. See ya." "See ya."

thats all i could think of. ur turn medli

miko


TP Zelda


medli

#44
hhhmmmm.......maybe you typed that because she's scared that if she disobeys her parents,she'll get into tromendous trouble...i'll write it 2moro

A Whocares comment, for those who will read this: this was medli's last post.