OOC: No, this is actually just a preview for the end of my story, and it's not actually finished. But I desire constructive critisism so that I can give the Rebel Flame a better sendoff.

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IC:

Kasei stood tall in the chamber, now satisfied, despite the countless wounds he has recieved not a moment ago. Now, on the ground before him, lies the deceased body of Jormund Gobi. Kasei hold in his left hand the shattered remains of his scimitar, and his right hand is too bloody to tell if it's holding something. Behind the man, Worru, Sovelis, and, further away, Orpheous, all look on, not knowing what could happen next.

The Rebel Flame turn around, to reveal to the three his very large chest wound which, even now, was closing up. Looks like that still wasn't enough to kill me. He thought. "Worru." He called. "It's your turn."

The little hybrid looked over at his grandfather with a mixed look of fear and denial. "Kasei," he started, "I told you before, i'm not going to kill you, no matter what." He declared obstinantly. Kasei smiled.

"What? So, you wish to allow me to continue to suffer the pain of this tortured life? A hundred years, i've searched for a way to end the pain, and now, you are going to do it." He claimed. Worru shook his head. "No."

Kasei smiled slightly wider, and held out his hand. "Then . . . I have no more use of you." He said, and Worru's eye's widened. "I will tear your being apart, Worru. Of course, I will not stop there. I will kill your mother, and Aria, then slaughter everyone you have ever met. I will plunge Hyrule into an inferno of hatred, and let everything go up in flames." He called out calmly. "W-what are you saying?!" Sovelis demanded, but Worru was faster than words, by the time Kasei had finished, the hybrid had already summoned his own scythe and had attacked Kasei across the middle, slicing a large wound into the man's stomach.

Kasei looked down at the wound, and then at Worru, who was enraged now beyond anything. "There now, was that so hard?" He asked calmly, as his own weapon reapeared in his hand, and he swung, only to have Worru block it.

Sovelis looked on at the fight unveiling before his eyes. Only moments ago, Kasei ended his grandfather's life, now he was seeking to put an end his own. He called out to the two of them, trying to get them to stop.

The two shiekahns flew past each other, twirled, and sliced, hacked, and overall attempted to kill each other using their respective weapons, both of them too absorbed in the fight to notice Sovelis' yells to end the fight. Even if they did, it was unlikely that they would listed. Kasei took some flesh from Worru's leg, and in turn lost a chunk of his shoulder. Both jumped away, and charged up their respective magical elemental attack. Both blinked at the same time, and the space between them became a giant fireball of light and darkness. At the same time, they both lunged forward through the inferno, and both swung their weapons, taking more blood from each other.

Kasei smiled, as he launched a fireball at the same time Worru created a shield of light. The two engaged again, and each unleashed a fury of strikes at the other. This time, Kasei deffinately recieved more wounds, but the few Worru recieved were deeper. Still, the little hybrid lunged forward, and swung his weapon . . .

which pierced Kasei's heart. Worru looked forward, and snapped out of his rage, realising only now what he had done. The boy watched, almost in slow motion, as his grandfather fell to his knees, smiling wildly.

Sovelis looked on in shock. Orpheous had to cover his mouth to keep from screaming. Worru dropped his weapon, and grabbed Kasei, tears comeing out of him like rain. He shook the Rebel Flame, who looked up at him. "You did a good job there, boy . . . . don't . . . . . don't tell Aria that you did this . . . she'll cry. I'll kill you if you ever make her cry, Worru." He said. Worru held him, and shook his head. "No! You . . . you . . ." he couldn't say anything.

Flames appeared all over the rebel flame's body, and began to engulf him, forcing Worru to let go and jump back, only able to watch as his grandfather was torn apart by his own element. This story was over, the armies of the darkness were being routed out, and all over Hyrule, people cheered, none of them knowing the secret battle that just took place.

Kasei Dornmos Gobi passed away, smiling.

After Kasei had died, Aria was the owner of the large, mansion-like house out in the southern fields of Northern Hyrule. Worru stayed there most of the time, but unlike before, he rarely acted like a pervert. All he did nowadays was sit around, staring off into space, barely paying attention to the girl he had loved, not even trying to walk in on her, "accidentally". In fact, she had sometimes walked in on him, herself in the nude, merely to prompt a responce, and just started to beat him up for not looking.

Then, there was the way he looked.

His hair was shorter in the front, now spiked up somewhat like Kasei's, as the hair on the back of his head was long enough to be tied into a ponytail. Worru didn't change his clothes, much, save for adding Kasei's tattoo symbol on the back of his shirt.

It was enough for her, one day just letting it all go, slamming her hands on the dining room table, and glaring the boy down. "Worru. Do something perverted. Say something perverted. Steal my clothes. Take one of those showers where I get traumatized at what's left behind. Just. Act. Like. Worru.", she said, angry, before sitting down in her chair, eyes watering up. "You're...You're not acting like the Worru I knew...", she said, sighing as her head rested in her arms.

Worru smiled, standing up and crossing over to the girl, mussing up her hair with a soft smile. "Kasei would've never believed this would happen, if he was still alive.", he said chuckling lightly. The girl, on the other hand, slapped his hand away, eyes still burning with anger, and wet from sadness. "I don't care about Kasei. I want you to act normal.", she growled at him, "So do that or leave!". With that, she ran up the stairs to her room, leaving the boy to stand there, dumbfounded.

Worru sat down with a sigh, as the ghostly voice of Kasei floated through his mind. The boy looked up, and smiled, now looking at what seemed to be the Rebel Flame himself, but was merely just a figment of his imagination. Well, well, well...You made her cry, Worru. Guess I'll have to kill you now, eh?, the apparition asked, the hybrid replying after a moment of thought. "I've tried to be different. Tried to grow up, Kasei. That is what she's told me to do before, right?", and yet the copy shook his head, the smile now gone. She said nothing about changing who you are, boy. Never once did I think you were that stupid, to misread that girl's mind.

With a sigh, the boy now sat back in his chair as he thought his reply over once more. "You died before you could explain our connection, you know.", and as this was said, the shadow merely shook his head, and tapped the side of his nose. I shouldn't have to.

Which one of you actually clicked "Go To Hell?"

C'mon, one of you, pay up.


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OOC: Sorry, Kasei, that would be me. You can't blame an RG for having a little fun, can you?

OOC: Yeah, Sorry about that. Plus, i'd like this topic to be a little reference for what you all plan your characters to do after the devastating war. Example:

IC: A man with blond hair and no left arm wandered down the streets of Ruto town, far from anywhere else. Occasionally, he would recieve a smile. After all, he was now very well known throughout the land, as one of the people who helped to stop the complete destruction of Hyrule, at the cost of much of his magic power.

It was true. Ever since that day, Denkou had been unable to manipulate lightning, and, in turn, was much weaker than ever before. But still, the fact that he was a hero did have a good side. And he could see that good side coming around the corner. "Hiya there, pretty lady. How would you like to come have a part-ay at my place?"

He did not happen to see the woman's husband behind her, and arrived at the hospital, bleeding internally.

Still, he was smiling. Why? Because that's what his master, his trainer, his greatest freind, Kasei, would do. And he, Denkou, would do the same.

OOC: Well, if it's any consolation, I said you needed more talking, but I also think you need to have more fighting.

IC: In his own heart, Orpheous had forgiven Worru rather quickly. However, he didn't really want to admit it. His mind was still disagreeing with him. Having logic to match that of Sherlock Holmes is a curse as well as a blessing. He had killed Kasei, one of his closest friends. After leaving the chamber, he simply went back to North Castle Town. He held a party, simply to keep the public thinking that everything was better now that the war was done. They had no clue that the biggest hero of the war was dead. The following day, in the privacy of Ryan's now guest empty house, Orpheous had a meeting for the elite of PFH, and other important people as well, to inform them that Kasei had died, and that Worru was the killer.

Eventually, they agreed to send Aria a letter explained their sorrow for the death of Kasei. They sent her everything they could gather that was rightfully his in PFH storage, ranging from magic artifacts to mission logs. Hopefully, these wouldn't make her anymore upset. Orpheous also sent a personal letter to Worru, and made sure that it wouldn't fall into Aria's hands. The letter contained words of understanding, and forgiveness. He was also given as much time as leave from the PFH as necessary to cope with the death of his grandfather. He also stated to both him, and to Aria, that the PFH would cover any financial problems and that they would be emotionally open to the two, should they won't to talk or something along those lines.

As for Orpheous, who was touched the most by the incident, he went on with his day to day life. He did this because in his own mind, he believed Kasei would have wanted it. Kasei never wanted them to mourn, in his mind. Kasei had wanted to die. Kasei yearned death. But still, every day, Kasei would haunt the deep recesses of his mind, making Orpheous think that it shouldn't have happened, both in the way it happened and the inconvenient timing. And sometimes, when he would be in his room and others weren't around, he would simply burst into tears, sometimes with barely thinking of the Rebel Flame, like how he used to drink a lot, and how he used to be a good Grandfather, and, what took his life, how he used to be so damn devoted to his country.

No one else at PFH would understand it, they weren't as close to him and Orph was. Sure, they mourned, but it wasn't the same. It was as if a chunk of Orpheous's soul was missing. All they knew was that Kasei's death greatly troubled him. But they would never know. Orpheous was there, he had seen it happen. He had been there, and he had done nothing.

Ooc: I don't quite understand.. is this like supposed to be placed in after the war times? Will you have a different main Kasei? Who do you wish to post here? Is it a part of the story, or completely brainstorming? >.>

OOC: I belive he's doing the topic...before it happens? Kind of a test run I guess. Although it's spoiling a lot for me.

OOC: Sabertache, if this had spoiled anything for you, I'm sorry, but you need to pay a lot more attention.

OOC: Worru's right. Saber, if you didn't know all of this, then you obviously never pay attention.

No, this is just a rough draft of the final cut, to see what you all think, as well as to get an idea of what you all will do after the war. It is not a "topic" per se, because I will not reply to this IC.

OOC: Holy crap, Denkou and Kasei were friends?!?!?

OOC: More or less. Mostly on Denkou's side. Kasei thought of him more as . . . . an annoyance? Yeah, let's call it that. It sounds a lot less mean than other things I could say.

Ooc: Aiden will be a slightly different character after the war.. but for the better I suppose. Not quite so.. childish. She'll also probably feel indebted to Denkou.. if he saves her that is.

OOC: Aria = not living with Worru. Drom would have a lon-lon cow.