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Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 8:57 pm
OoC: I'm not much of the person who likes fights, so this topic shall be mostly talking. If that's ok with you, Dmetri.

Description is needed when you make a new topic and join one. Make the person seem like as if they are right there.

Wait, I don't do that all the time, so don't really worry about it.

IC: Cathy tapped her foot with an irrated look on her face. She glared at a few people who had wondered in and had gotten themselves lost. The tall zora sighed and leaned against a tree with her arms crossed over her chest. She glared down at the ground. Cathy was irrated, and she was irrated about something that's been bugging her most of the week.

"Where the hell is that girl!?" Cathy shrieked at the sky. She let out a sigh and fell to the ground. Rolling over on her back, she looked up at the sky with her bright blue eyes. The wind picked up slightly, making the tree branches over head sway back and forth.

Cathy propped herself up on her elbows when she heard a rustle from somewhere close. One of her hands trailed to her sword. Maybe it was an enemy or someone who wanted or-

"KYA!!!"

Kayla tripping and falling to the ground. Cathy layed back down on her back with a sigh as the brunette princess got to her feet.

"It's about time you appeared," Cathy commented. She kept her eyes at the sky, instead of looking over at the girl who was currently picking twigs out of her straight hair that reached all the way down to the bottom of her knees.

"Sorry, I've been busy," Kayla mumbled. She let out a small yelp as one of the twigs snagged on her hair. She tugged slightly softer. Cathy rolled her eyes and got to her feet.

"If you ever want something done, you gotta do it with force," Cathy said as she yanked the twig out of the girl's hair. Kayla let out another yelp and rubbed her scalp that was currently hurting.

"Not true, I've been able to get through most of my life with my carefullness," Kayla added. She shivered as the wind blew. "Oh, God! It's so cold!" Kayla rubbed her arms. "I wish I was back in Kito Village. Why did you have to drag me here?"

"Because I wanted you to suffer," Cathy muttered with sarcasim dripping from her voice. Kayla rolled her eyes.

They didn't knwo that someone else was there, listening to them bicker back and forth. That is, if they were about to make their presence noticed.

OoC: Um. . . Hm....
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Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 9:43 pm
Laido whistled a lively tune, running his fingers through his blond hair. He was being accompanied by a grumpy mage, who had been threatening for the last thirty minutes that if he was to keep whistling, he'd have his vocal cords ripped out immediately. He ignored this with a shrug, but toned down his whistling just a litle bit. Sakiko was about to strangle him, when suddenly the sight of two young ladies caught her eye.

Laido smiled, his flirty ways calling to him like an owner would to its dog. He gave an elegant bow to Kayla, and grinned, flashing his pearly white teeth,

"And what would be the name of this elegant lady, here?"

Sakiko rapped him smartly on the head, and snapped,

"Should you be doing that when Zapheta isn't here?"

Laido rubbed his head pathetically, and shrugged.
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Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2008 3:09 pm
Kayla looked around, surprised at how Laido had bowed to her. "Is he talking to me or you?" she questioned to her zora friend. Cathy rolled her eyes. She tugged at Kayla's hair slightly, getting another twig out of her hair.

"No, Kayla, he was talking to that tree over there," Cathy mumbled with sarcasim. "Of course he was talking to you!" She gave her friend a hit on the head.

"Ouch! You don't need to be violent with me!" Kayla grumbled. She whacked Cathy's hand away from her hair. "And I can take these out myself, thank you very much."

"All I'm wondering is where you got all of those," Cathy muttered. She turned her attention finally to Sakiko and Laido. "Hey there, that's Kayla and I'm Cathy. Nice to met ya, you flirter," she said, referring to Laido. "Do you keep him in line or do you just hurt him?" Cathy questioned to Sakiko.
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Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2008 7:14 pm
Many leaves and twigs crunched as Dmetri made his way past and twards the oratories heard in the group of four adventurers.He walked up to Laido,Cathy,Kayla,and Sakiko who were conversing.Dmetri spoke after making his presence seen.

'Hello travelors.I didn't recongnised you before but now I see who you are.May I join you in conversation?'

He awaited for a reply and started peering around the forest and its surroundings(as he does all the time after making a comment),seeing birds coming back and flying to the north.'Spring is coming soon,'he pondered.
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Posted: Tue Feb 26, 2008 8:47 pm
"Well, sure ya can! But we aren't talking about anything just yet," Kayla said with a grin on her face. Cathy crossed her arms and rolled her eyes at her friend's kindness.

"How are we friends?" Cathy questioned. Kayla looked over at her with a confused look. "You know what, never mind," Cathy added quickly. Kayla nodded, but still looked slightly confused.
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Posted: Tue Feb 26, 2008 9:48 pm
Thorne yelped in pain as he tripped over a tree root, tumbling to the ground yet rolling up swiftly with the agility of an archer. "Ouch... that hurt!" He whined childishly. He looked up, still confused, wondering why he could hear so many voices in his head. It took a few seconds for him to realize that he had stumbled upon a group of adventures in the middle of conversation.

"What's flirting?" Thorne blurted out at once, not realizing that he had just intruded the meeting out of nowhere with his innocent question. "Uh oh. Oops, do I know any of you? I'm not really supposed to talk to strangers and stuff..." he said, disappointed.
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Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 6:46 pm
'Hello there,archer.We're having a meeting,I guess,I dunno.We just stumbled upon this spot at once.Care to join?'I'm Dmetri,a mage from Holodrom and came here to practice magic,'professed Dmetri,tying his shoes near a tree stump.
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Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 7:30 pm
OoC: Ok, here's another little tip. Please put two spaces in between each sentence. It looks too cramped together when you just type it like that. And one when you use commas.

IC: Cathy glanced around and let out a small whistle. "Man, never would have guessed that this many people would be out here. Much less approach me." Cathy let out a small chuckle.

Kayla leaned against a tree and glanced around at everyone. Astonishment shone in her vivid green eyes. "Yes, I seem to agree."

"There's one thing that we agree on, finally," Cathy muttered. Kayla rolled her eyes.

Cathy soon let out a small chuckle again when Thorne had asked what flirting was. "My, my, my, you don't know what flirting is? That is just sad, very, very sad."
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Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2008 5:45 pm
'I agree with your thought of the forest's population.It's like a pestilance.As for the "flirting" thing,I believe he was saying that to replace "What's going on?", Cathy,' told Dmetri,who just finished tying his shoes.

He peered around and found a feather of a roc.He took it and took an ink well from his pockets.He wrote on his parchment,'In case I made a mistake in your quote,I wrote the definition of "flirt".
Flirt:(verb,noun)1:To make a friendly,romantic gesture.2:The act of making a friendly,romantic gesture.
'Here you go,' declared Dmetri,handing the parchment over to Thorne and putting his quill and inkwell in his pockets.
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Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2008 7:06 pm
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Deku Scrub 12 wrote:He peered around and found a feather of a roc.
I found two errors within this. "Feather of a roc" doesn't make sense. Don't you mean "feather on a rock"? Um, and the other mistake is that you forgot the "k" in "rock."

I'll do an IC soon, but I need to take care of something.
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Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2008 8:11 pm
OoC:A roc is a cryptid in cryptozoology.It is depicted as a giant bird so you made an error correcting my false errors.

Sorry,but my PM isn't working so good so I had to post here.
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Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2008 8:29 pm
OoC: Ok, so that I don't make any more mistakes, what grade are you in? Because I haven't heard of that before.

Wait, is that stuff even in Hyrule time? *shrugs*

IC: Cathy leaned against a tree and sighed. "Someone just draw my sword and stab me now." Kayla turned her attention to her zora friend and placed her hands on her hips. She glared daggers at Cathy.

"Why are you asking that?" Kayla questioned.

"Because I'm surrounded by idiots." Cathy reseved a smack from the brunette princess. "Ouch! What the hell was that for!?"

"Just for being pathetic."

OoC: Does anyone know a good way to help out with dry contacts? My eyes have been bugging me all day long.
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Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 4:49 pm
Dmetri watched as the two fought.'They never get along...'thought Dmetri.'Thump.Thump.Thump.' went through the forest.He heard weeds snapping and saw a translucent,blurry figure in the forest.He began to speak after remaining quiet for five minutes,now breaking his silence.'O!think someone's coming...'

OoC:Those thumping noises are coming from my new NPC once I make him.
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Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 8:41 pm
"Hey, Cath', do you hear something?" Kayla questioned, stopping herself from what she was about to yell at her zora friend.

"Nope, why are you asking me? I don't hear anything," Cathy muttered. She pulled out her sword and started stabbing a nearby stump. "I wish that someone would pull these out of the ground, it hurts when you trip over them."

"I hear something though, I think something might be out there," Kayla said. Cathy rolled her eyes and pointed her sword at Kayla.

"And I say there isn't anything out there. I don't hear anything out there, so there is nothing out there. What I say goes," Cathy snapped.

"Well, my hearing is better than yours," Kayla snapped back.

"How?"

"Because I'm a-" Kayla stopped herself. She bit her bottom lip from saying anything else. "I know something is out there though."
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Posted: Thu Mar 13, 2008 5:58 pm
"Oh, I really don't know what it means-" Thorne stopped as the piece of parchment was held out to him. He took a long time reading the words, scratching his head a few times as if he did not understand. "What does this word say?" Thorne asked, showing Kayla and pointing at the word 'gesture'.

"Most of it makes sense... except for those last bits..." He said uncertainly.
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