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Started by Mr. bubbles, May 07, 2007, 02:33:20 PM

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Mr. bubbles

is  Topic: How 'bout some rules? it
I Like Pie.

DW

Yes, that would be it 8)as if the title didn't give it away...
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Mr. bubbles

Ok. Just read it
I Like Pie.

Gamefreak

We're getting off topic.

I'll allow his double post on the grounds that I made a double post as well, he might not have been aware of why I made the double post.

Weetle, assuming that you have read the rules, any more offenses from here on out are warnings.

Mr. bubbles

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Ok.
I Like Pie.

DW

If you had read the rules, you would have known one word posts aren't allowed. 8)Go read them.
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Mr. bubbles

Ok. Re-read. Now i'm going to book mark the place
I Like Pie.

DW

Okay, good. Hopefully we won't have to discuss this any more.
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Mr. bubbles

Ok. So how did you like it. Excelent, good, so-so, poor, or junk.
I Like Pie.

Mysterious F.

You read the rules, so now, you get a warning for one word posting according to Gamefreak.

Mr. bubbles

What happened about my story. We are talking about the rules. So do you like it or not.
I Like Pie.

Mysterious F.

It sounds like a poor attempt at a J.K. Rowling-level story. Some of the stuff there jsut sounds way to much like Rowling's work. The scar and the Philosopher's Stone.

I also agree that just because you're in 6th grade doesn't give you an excuse. I joined a year ago in 6th grade and had the same grammar abilities I do now,  with some (minor) improvements. The only times I make a grammar mistake is due to my incredibly fast typing or because the word I'm using is very complicated. The second one rarely happens, though.

Mr. bubbles

No. Their is just the philosipher's stone. But I have read J.K. Rowling's work. So did you like it or not. That is my question. :-\
I Like Pie.

Mysterious F.

Although you have a story working its way to completion, it still is too much of a medieval Harry Potter for me to pay alot of attention to.

Mr. bubbles

Ok. I'm over at a freinds house right now so I can't work on it.
I Like Pie.