Writer'sBlock
Level 1
Joined: Experience: 6
Class: Scholar
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TP: 0
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Well hi again. I got another topic for all yall again. It's just one screen down from my last. That rauru place ya know. Well...if it's not too much to ask, I'd like some critiques. I thought this might be anice place to progress on some of my writing techniques and read how some of you write which I have in fact...so if you can PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE CRITIQUE....please.
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Let me write in peace
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Kasei
Level 18
Joined: Experience: 3353
Class: Boss//Final Boss
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TP: 5
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the east will be the portal to gannon!
OOC: look for A HOLE TO THE UNDERWORLD topik
a man lay dying near a farm!
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Kasei
immune to poison
"What does it feel like to be so...alive?" ~Kasei
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mikaudes
Level 7
Joined: Experience: 435
Class: Vagabond//Ranger
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TP: 1
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A lone ranger returns after a long absence
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Level 11
Joined: Experience: 1286
Class: Grunt//Nomad
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TP: 7
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OOC: Crud, I'd better get my storyline in order. There's only one thing I can do to fix this rut...
IC:
Two assassins are left out of a plot at the Stock Pot Inn.
OOC: Oh yea, it's back. It has to be done, guys, so I'm gonna need two people to get over to that. Pretty please?
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A Collection of Profiles
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Str :6 Def :17 Agi :4 Int :4 Spi : 1
Physical Damage Escape Rate : 17 + 2 (DEF + Agi) = 19
Spl :12 HP :51
Willpower :9
1H Deku Sword DMG : 5 + 6(Str) = 11
Dual Wield DMG [1H Deku Sword] : 11(1H Deku Sword DMG) X 2(L3 Dual Wield) = 22
FIRE DMG : 10 + 4 + 1 (Level + INT+ Grunt Base) = 15
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mikaudes
Level 7
Joined: Experience: 435
Class: Vagabond//Ranger
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TP: 1
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A mask salesman is outside the castle
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Nogare, son of Greyblade
Level 11
Joined: Experience: 1397
Class: Grunt/Vassal
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TP: 4
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OOC: WHAAA?! Hold on, Kasei; Ganon is dead. Is it like a portal to the afterlife or something?
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Kasei
Level 18
Joined: Experience: 3353
Class: Boss//Final Boss
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TP: 5
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yup! just go with it... I got a nice story planned out already...
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Kasei
immune to poison
"What does it feel like to be so...alive?" ~Kasei
Stats Inert-See profile
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mikaudes
Level 7
Joined: Experience: 435
Class: Vagabond//Ranger
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TP: 1
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Ok... New Quest, it starts east of the castle, with <a href="viewtopic.php?t=780">The mask salesman<a>, yeah!, I plan it to be at least a 4 character party, I'm counting on you... or maybe not
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Nogare, son of Greyblade
Level 11
Joined: Experience: 1397
Class: Grunt/Vassal
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TP: 4
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A Vassal is training himself in the Temple of Nayru.
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Brin
Level 6
Joined: Experience: 280
Class: Scholar//Mage
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TP: 0
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Seeing this strange man calling out random prophecies, Brin wonders, what is he talking about?
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Nogare, son of Greyblade
Level 11
Joined: Experience: 1397
Class: Grunt/Vassal
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TP: 4
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A Hylian Knight studies in the Library.
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Kasei
Level 18
Joined: Experience: 3353
Class: Boss//Final Boss
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TP: 5
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wich one? there are three now!
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Kasei
immune to poison
"What does it feel like to be so...alive?" ~Kasei
Stats Inert-See profile
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Nogare, son of Greyblade
Level 11
Joined: Experience: 1397
Class: Grunt/Vassal
: 233
TP: 4
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Dream Illusionist
Level 6
Joined: Experience: 376
Class: Scholar // Mage
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TP: 1
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Nayru reveals a strange secret
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STR: 1 // DEF: 12 // AGI: 3 // INT: 9 // SPI: 3 // HP: 53 // SPL: 41
Tayro Wind
Last edited in 06-10-11
Currently revamping
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Marin
Level 8
Joined: Experience: 663
Class: Scholar///Cleric
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TP: 0
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A new door at the Tantari Rock has opened.
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Denning UPDATED-5/4/07-Marin Data
STR 1 DEF 12 AGI 4 INT 3 SPI 3 Will power=8 SPL 30 HP 33
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