A bloodied beaten man II

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Posted: Wed Jul 20, 2005 1:43 pm
As you walk by, you see a bloddied beaten man floating in the water with a strange bag deflating by the minute. There is a chest full of Rupees on quicksand and if you save one, the other is gone. What will you do?
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Posted: Wed Jul 20, 2005 3:01 pm
There is a chest of rupees on quicksand, sinking fast, and a bloodied man. This has to be a trap of sorts. Darilan wants to save the beaten man, but he knows not how deep the water is. He is no swimmer, but he throws off his outer cloak and wades into the water in hopes of reaching the man before the water is over his head.
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Darilan/Relinquos

STR 1
DEF 12
AGI 4
INT 3
SPI 3
SPL: 27
HP: 33

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Posted: Wed Jul 20, 2005 7:02 pm
Julian sees a chest full of rupees and a sheikah swimming slowly toward a man in danger of drowning. ' What will i do, save a man in need or save a chest of rupees and become rich. I have to save the man,' Julian thinks to himself. Julian rushes into the water ignoring the intense waves crashing head on to his body. The zora gets closer and closer to the unconcious man. Every second, the bleeding man floats under the water a little bit more. Julian is so close he is mere feets away from the sheikah and the water becomes more and more red as the blood mixes with the salt water.
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Julian

STR = 1 DEF = 12 AGI = 1 INT = 3 SPI = 4 HP = 54
SPL = 22 WILL = 9 Staff DMG = 10 Spell DMG = 12
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Posted: Wed Jul 20, 2005 11:01 pm
The Zora will get to him faster than Darilan ever will. Realizing that, he turns around and heads to the beach. He can help the hurt guy on land better than he could in the water. He wonders if he should seek help. Walking in the rough water isn't easy for him. When on the sand he feels so much better with pull and resistance gone.

OOC: I have seen an improvement in your posts since you've started, Julian. Let me point out, however, that you did a little bit of God-Moding in that post. Hiro only mentioned that the man was bloodied, and he would not be turning the water as red as you described unless he had a severed vein or artery. Hiro didn't specifiy how badly he was wounded.
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Darilan/Relinquos

STR 1
DEF 12
AGI 4
INT 3
SPI 3
SPL: 27
HP: 33

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Posted: Wed Jul 20, 2005 11:46 pm
Julian sees the sheikah heading back to shore and wonders why the man decided to head back to dry land, but the zora had no time to ponder on such trivial topics. Julian was now in reaching distance. He extended his hand trying to attain a grip on the loose body. But without some active motion of the drowning man, there is a slim chance that the zora can manuver the injured man back to shore.

OOC: Thanks for the compliment and the advise. Did i do any god-modding in this post?
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Julian

STR = 1 DEF = 12 AGI = 1 INT = 3 SPI = 4 HP = 54
SPL = 22 WILL = 9 Staff DMG = 10 Spell DMG = 12
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Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2005 12:16 am
As the water drips off him, Darilan stands and hopes the strange Zora can save him. When he gets him on shore, he can use his life spell to help him a little bit.

OOC: Very good. You are heeding advice well. I didn't catch any in that post at all, so it looks like you are catching on. You gave plenty of room for Hiro to do his work as the mod in this topic.
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Darilan/Relinquos

STR 1
DEF 12
AGI 4
INT 3
SPI 3
SPL: 27
HP: 33

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Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2005 12:49 pm
As you help the man out, you see he is Hiro himself! "Thank you all. You saved my life. It's a good thing you didn't take the rupees for two reasons:

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<li>I would have drowned.
<li>The rupees were an imocon ready to kill you the moment you touched them.
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OOC: The man was very wounded, go north a bit and find out why.
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Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2005 5:04 pm
" It was nothing," Julian says to the man, while still looking at his injury, the zora tosses a role of fabric from his satchel for the man to bandage up his wounds. Then he focuses his attention to the sheikah near by. " Why did you come back to the shore?" the zora inquires while whiping the salt water from his wooden staff that was stupidly left tied to the zora's back, only to cause him to slow down.

OOC: Hiro, try to be a bit more specific the next time you post, it took me a while to figure out if you were still in the water or on land.
Last edited by phantompigcollector on Mon Jul 25, 2005 4:01 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Julian

STR = 1 DEF = 12 AGI = 1 INT = 3 SPI = 4 HP = 54
SPL = 22 WILL = 9 Staff DMG = 10 Spell DMG = 12
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Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 3:14 pm
OOC: Oh, hehe... haven't quite figured out the posting bit yet...
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2005 1:49 pm
Alpha appeared from the distance. "So you chose not to heed my counsel," (OOC: Go to the first bloodied beaten man for this. Back to IC) he said to Hiro. "You really should train more before attempting to fight this Remix. Either that, or get some friends that will help you." He did realize that this was probably a personal matter to Hiro, but he felt he had to offer this advice.
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Posted: Sat Jan 28, 2006 1:51 am
Dogura thinking quickly decides to take another step tword repaying his debt. he dives in to save the man...
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Posted: Thu Mar 09, 2006 4:53 pm
OOC: THis topic is so old! Dont post anymore! pleasE! This is my first story and im on the fourth!
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